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6 weeks
TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.
Link.
I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.
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9 weeks
Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.
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10 weeks
"New" Story and New Group

I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.
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13 weeks
Sizes Precision

With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.
As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.
By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.
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13 weeks
Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.
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Apr

1st

2021

Getting Better · 3:12pm Apr 1st, 2021

So, as many of you know, English isn't my birth language, which is the reason why my stories seem so... vocabulary poor at times, especially when it is about putting English expressions. Even in my native language, French, I'm far from being Molière. But I really wish to get better. I want to improve the quality of the descriptions in general which are probably my biggest problem. I want to better show the expressions of the characters, how they are feeling and all.

To put it simply, don't be surprised if you see my writing style changing a little in the following chapters. It will just be me trying improve.

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