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Alaborn


Somewhere in the USA. Probably older than you. And something about MLP:FIM makes me want to write stories. Unfortunately, being gainfully employed cuts into my writing time.

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  • 147 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Strong Seconds

    Not an episode review this time.

    PresentPerfect writes about the "Applejack Problem", that a character with everything figured out becomes too boring. Her cutie mark is literally deciding she wants to stay home.

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    1 comments · 390 views
  • 148 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Putting Your Hoof Down and It's About Time

    S2E19 Putting Your Hoof Down

    Watching this episode as part of the whole series is jarring. You have episode after episode of ponies being kind and friendly, then a whole bunch of rude ponies all at once.

    I hate Angel Bunny in this episode. I want to turn him into hasenpfeffer.

    I'd like to know why there just happens to be a hedge maze somewhere near Ponyville.

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    3 comments · 227 views
  • 152 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Hearts and Hooves Day and A Friend in Deed

    S2E17 Hearts and Hooves Day

    The writers have chosen, once again, to feature a holiday or celebration in this episode. Arguably, this is the seventh time (Summer Sun Celebration, Winter Wrap Up, Running of the Leaves, Grand Galloping Gala, Nightmare Night, Hearth's Warming, Hearts and Hooves Day), and the third time directly referencing a major American holiday.

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    3 comments · 208 views
  • 153 weeks
    Retrospective Review: The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 and Read It and Weep

    S2E15 The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000

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  • 153 weeks
    Retrospective Review: Baby Cakes and The Last Roundup

    S2E13 Baby Cakes

    So this was an episode that came completely out of the blue. There was no indication of Cup Cake being pregnant, let alone with twins. I'm assuming there was a toy involved.

    "That makes sense, right?" Sure, but if you're a pegasus stallion with a beige coat or a unicorn stallion with a yellow coat, I wouldn't recommend dining at Sugarcube Corner.

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Feb
18th
2021

Retrospective Review: Winter Wrap Up and Call of the Cutie · 7:24am Feb 18th, 2021

S1E11 Winter Wrap Up

It took until Episode 11 to get one that I'm not going to have any big complaints about. The Mane Six finally feel like they're in character.

This is one of my favorite episodes, as can be seen with the multiple times I've referenced Winter Wrap Up in fics here, and the song Winter Wrap Up is one of my favorites. It's also the first of many episodes that describe an annual event that only happens once in the series (and many of these aren't even mentioned again). But we don't need to see it again.

The focus of the episode is wrapping up winter manually, in the traditional earth pony way. But watching it again, I'm now wondering what it's like to change from winter to spring in Canterlot. What kind of magic does Princess Celestia use? I don't think I've ever seen that as the focus of a story here. Furthermore, is there a pegasus method for changing seasons too?

I do like Twilight Sparkle's embracing the earth pony ways, pointedly not using her magic (until she has her moral failure later in the episode). But we do see Rarity use her magic when passing a bird's nest to Twilight Sparkle.

It just feels right for Twilight Sparkle to try a bunch of new things, physical activities, and not be good at them. And when she decides to cheat and use her magic, it feels like a natural progression in the story. She gets caught, she sees the error of her ways, and then finds something that she's good at that can help the town as a whole succeed.

All in all, a great episode.

S1E12 Call of the Cutie

There's nothing like an episode title that references the work of H. P. Lovecraft.

This might have been the first episode of the series I watched. [Since I'm apparently never getting one of those author interviews where the question "How did you discover My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic?" is asked, I'll briefly describe it. I remember seeing pictures posted on the Internet by early bronies, in particular homemade Magic: the Gathering cards for the Mane Six. I liked the art style, and since I've enjoyed shows like this before, I checked out the two episodes available on The Hub's website. This was one of them.]

Miss Cheerilee's lesson is really good at explaining cutie marks to someone who has never seen any iteration of MLP before. And I'm of the right age to appreciate 80's Cheerilee.

That poor class. All those students who never spoke, and will be written out of the class by the next episode showing the CMC.

Apple Bloom's whining is irritating, but perfectly in character for a child of indeterminate age. (Seriously. As a fanfic writer, there's an annoying disconnect between the characters acting around age 8, but I see the cutie mark as representing puberty/the cusp of adulthood, so maybe 12-13, and the name cuteceañera references a celebration at age 15.)

What has Applejack been teaching Apple Bloom that she's so clueless about selling? She didn't grow up tagging along while Big Sister sold apples?

The other ponies are in character here. Rainbow Dash tries a bunch of things (basically creating the template the CMC will follow later), Pinkie Pie does something she enjoys, Twilight Sparkle uses magic and gives a lecture.

Poor Pinkie Pie. Her song ends up ruined because of a certain fanfic named Cupcakes.

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, as bullies, feel too real. There's that wonderful "whatever we say is right" attitude where, having only had a cutie mark for a couple of days, the new rule is cutie marks are in. And both Cheerilee and Applejack ignore/are unaware of the bullying.

At the end, it's a good way to introduce the Cutie Mark Crusaders, who are a younger version of the Mane Six and are great characters in which age-appropriate fans can see themselves.

Comments ( 2 )

It's also the first of many episodes that describe an annual event that only happens once in the series (and many of these aren't even mentioned again).

Well, we do see them setting up winter in "Tanks for the Memories." It kind of counts.

Furthermore, is there a pegasus method for changing seasons too?

That's part of the earth pony way, suspiciously enough. Really, the whole tradition seems like a subtle way to tell unicorns to sit on their own horns and spin. I'm not saying it's a bad episode. Anything but! It just feels vaguely tribalist to say "No magic" when the pegasi are banishing storm systems with migration formations.

Miss Cheerilee's lesson is really good at explaining cutie marks to someone who has never seen any iteration of MLP before.

From what I recall from decades-old secondhand information—my sister was into G1, or at least the toys—this explanation for butt pictures is unique to Friendship is Magic.

She didn't grow up tagging along while Big Sister sold apples?

Well, she'd never met Sweetie Belle, who's presumably lived in town her whole life, so probably?

These retrospectives are a delight to see. Thanks for keeping them up. :twilightsmile:

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From what I recall from deacdes-old secondhand information—my sister was into G1, or at least the toys—this explanation for butt pictures is unique to Friendship is Magic.

Can confirm. I'm not even sure they ever had a name, at least not in animated media, before G4.

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