Writing is Rewriting

Which doesn't necessarily mean that the end result is really going to be any better, but, after writing chapter 2 of Ambershine I left it for one or two days and re-read it and god it was so BORING. So I started it again. And we'll see how that goes.

In the meantime, here's an interesting short lil' video that's got me doubting the current re-write: "And then" vs. "But" and "Therefore" in writing structure. I think it's a good watch, only about 5 minutes of your time. Here's the even shorter version, with the South Park writers. Good watch.

See you soon!