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Live at peace with all men, and carry a long sword that all men may live at peace with you.

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  • 118 weeks
    Backstory: A Lesson in Kindness

    I don't have much to say today... [There is a collective gasp, and two readers faint] So, this entry will be rather short. [Cheers and applause ring out]

    Anyway... moving on.

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  • 123 weeks
    Backstory: Little Filly Lost

    First, some context. The Dark Steel series is a spin off from The Quicksilver Chronicles. The private investigator Dark Steel is first mentioned in chapter 3 of One Of Us where he helps Quicksilver and Misty find a lost friend. Those events are retold from Steel's point of view in

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  • 131 weeks
    Backstory: The Painless Murders

    In the story One of Us I introduce a private detective, Dark Steel, that Quicksilver and Misty hire to help them find Tinker Cob. He was a fun character, but didn't get nearly enough screen-time. So I decided to tell the story of the search for Tinker from his point-of-view. That story because

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  • 135 weeks
    Backstory: The Alchemist, part 2

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  • 136 weeks
    Backstory: The Alchemist, part 1

    The genesis of this story goes back to 2016, long before I'd ever watched the first episode of FiM (early 2020). At that time, I saw a piece of artwork showing a wizard walking. That's it. Just walking with his staff and a cape billowing out behind him. Something about that image inspired me to figure out who he was and why he was in a rush to get somewhere. So I started writing. I stopped

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Dec
16th
2020

Pre-Read and Editing · 5:31pm Dec 16th, 2020

Once you have a story (or ten) completed, you have to get them ready to publish.  Yes, you can just throw them up as is, but creating a quality story probably needs a few sets of additional eyes on it.

This process generally takes two forms.  The first is a pre-reader who reads through the story looking at the flow, plot, character development and other higher-level aspects.  The second is an editor (or proofreader).  They look at the story from a more technical level which includes: grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence/paragraph structure.

The reality is fuzzier.  Pre-readers will note missing commas, and editors will comment on story points.  But overall, the above distinctions hold true and one should use both, and in the logical order.

I have two pre-readers.  One is through the entire series.  The other about two-thirds of the way through.  They've both been very supportive of the stories in addition to making a variety of suggested improvements.  I must say their positive feedback did give me a bit of a false level of confidence.

Enter the editor.  We've completed one story, and are working on the second.  They are doing an excellent job of ripping the story to shreds.  They aren't wrong, but wow, the level of work needed to address issues is notably more than writing it was.

Next week: Cover Art, part 1

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