mary sue test Nano Discussions · 4:42pm Dec 6th, 2020
Why not?
(X) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design. (Do spots of different colours in his coat count? They don't actively sparkle but idk)
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
( ) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
(X) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
(X) Your OC has non-canon markings.
( ) Your OC has rainbow colors.
( ) Your OC's name is an anagram.
( ) Your OC's cutie mark has something to do with the elements of harmony.
( ) Your OC has their own version of the elements of harmony.
(X) Does your OC have multi-colored eyes?
( ) Are they taller than big Macintosh?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with a canon character?
( ) Are they in a romantic relationship with one of the mane-six?
() Are they in a romantic relationship with royalty?
( ) Are they royalty?
(X) Do they have more than two colors in their mane?
( ) Does their tail have more colors than their mane?
( ) Gradient on their legs/wings/face?
( ) Are they enemies with Chrysalis/Tirek/Etc? (Add an extra point for every canon villain)
( ) Is your OC friends with one of the mane six? (Add an extra point for every extra character)
(X) Your OC has used Rainbow Power/The Elements of Harmony/Strong Magic
(X) Your OC's Coat is Black
(X) Your OC has black and red in their design.
(?) Your OC has more than three major virtues/vices. (He's me, so idk probably)
( ) Your OC has powers from an alternative franchise/crossover
( ) Your OC has encountered a non-revamped generation 1 character.
( ) Your OC is adored by all they meet. (Short No)
( ) Your OC is hated by everyone.
( ) Except one? (What?)
( ) Do they have a similar/same mane to a character from the show.
( ) Your OC is a shipping baby
(I feel like alot of this was because I did colour theory with Nano and like red and blue colour matches with black backgrounds/highlights)
Grand Total: 8-9
For this part, subtract 1 point from your previous total for every "X".
( ) Your OC is an alcoholic.
(X) Your OC is an Earth Pony.
( ) Your OC is selfish.
( ) Your OC is a smoker.
() Your OC has a severe flaw that has hindered them
() Your OC's cutie mark is something lame
( ) Your OC's only picture is via character generator (Subtract 3 points)
Grand Total: 7-8
(I'm pretty sure most of these points are because of his design)
1-9: Your OC is safe, relatively unique but not over the top.
10-19: Your OC is Moderate, but a little out of Show-Canon.
20-29: Your OC is a bit Mary-Sueish, you may want to revise some of their capabilities.
30-36: Your OC is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you really should revise their capabilities.
36+: Your OC is an extreme Mary Sue/Gary Stu, you NEED to revise this character.