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Mystic Mind


The greatest storyteller of our time, or just another smuck pony fan on the internet? YOU decide! (Also I do episode analysis sometimes.)

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  • 28 weeks
    Announcing Writing Commissions!

    For the first time ever, I am open to writing commissions!

    I'm sticking to familiar fandoms like MLP, High Guardian Spice, etc, for now, though in future I may expand to original stories. I am charging £10 per 1000 words with the only restriction being no explicit NSFW stories (explicit sex, extreme gore, character torture and the like), though non-sexual nudity is fine.

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  • 28 weeks
    Announcing Writing Commissions!

    For the first time ever, I am open to writing commissions!

    I'm sticking to familiar fandoms like MLP, High Guardian Spice, etc, for now, though in future I may expand to original stories. I am charging £10 per 1000 words with the only restriction being no explicit NSFW stories (explicit sex, extreme gore, character torture and the like), though non-sexual nudity is fine.

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  • 130 weeks
    High Guardian Spice: Flawed Brilliance and Fantasy Fun (Spoiler review/analysis)

    (Note: This is an updated review to include a greater discussion of spoilers, and to elaborate on one or two points I could have made clear.)

    TL;DR: Though far from perfect, primarily due to the rough-around-the-edges animation, High Guardian Spice does a wonderful job in presenting its fantasy coming of age story, building on common heroic fantasy tropes to great effect.

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  • 131 weeks
    High Guardian Spice: Setting a High Bar for Future Western Animation

    Despite all the delays, High Guardian Spice is finally here! I will admit upfront that I have some level of bias, since I'm a non-binary fantasy nerd who loves all things magical and colourful. This show was always going to be on my radar, but has it lived up to my lofty expectations?

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  • 136 weeks
    My Little Pony: A new Generation

    My Little Pony: A New Gen is a mixed bag. It has a good setup that builds itself on the legends of FiM, and is a film about the monsters we make ourselves to be. It shows how prejudice and stereotype can be pervasive in culture, playing on our fears of the out-group. It's just a shame the story beats feel so forced, with a portion of the cast being under-developed. The resolution also feels

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Oct
18th
2020

Deconstruction is Magic: A My Little Pony Retrospective (S1E8) · 8:33pm Oct 18th, 2020

Grrrrrrrrrrrrreetings everypony, and welcome back to Deconstruction is Magic, my Retrospective/Review/Analysis of every episode of My Little Pony: Friendship is magic ever. Today, we have the episode that launched a thousand ships (the other way), Look Before You Sleep. Without wasting any more time, let's get on with the analysis! I am the Mage of Mind, reminding you, as always, that even a cheeseburger can be deconstructed to its source.

I'll be honest here, I'm not overly fond of this episode, but I will try to be as fair as possible. This is episdoe is a classic odd-couple sitcom arrangement, with both Rarity and Applejack portraying polar opposites in terms of feminine personalities. And with a storm schedules to last all night through Ponyville, they must try and work through their differences for the sake of Twilight's slumber party.

I emphasise the word "try", because they don't actually do very much to get along, instead using almost every opportunity to twist Twilight's plans in order to spite the other. This goes on for almost the entire episode. I do like that neither of them is being portrayed as wholly correct, as they both have qualities which do make the slumber party enjoyable for Twilight. Rarity compliments the more delicate, traditionally feminine activities (such as makeovers and making smores), while Applejack's rugedness helps her seriously bring some force to the pillow fight!


(War... war never changes...)

The rest of the episode is focused on Twilight ticking off all the "by the book" activites for a slumber party, which is cute, seeing as she's so excited to finally have friends to partake in. It's not until the third act when Rarity and Applejack at last start listening to one another, working together to fix the mess they created. There is some subtext about the rigidity of gender roles, being that both AJ and Rarity are so stuck in their ways, they don't seem willing to accept that they can be more than this one shade of feminine. But this doesn't really take centre stage, as it's used more as an excuse to keep them arguing on and on and on.

But beyond that, there really isn't all that much to talk about. It would've been nice to see Rarity and Applejack gradually loosen up, instead of it happening all at once in the final few minutes. What we got, regardless, is just okay. Not terrible, but definitely a meh episode.


(I can see, forever...)

Conclusion

Look Before you Sleep is one of the blandest episodes so far, relying entirely on its conflict to give the plot any sort of momentum. Any character development is shoved toward the last five minutes, and though the final message of understanding differences is good, it could've been portrayed with greater overall finess. This episode gets 5/10. What did you think of this episode? Do you have more to add where I didn't? Feel free to let me know in the comments of this blog! until next time, take care all~.

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