Feeling Alone ch, 1 remade

over a year ago before MLP S9 ended i made an alternate ending of "Hearth's Warming Club". After i post it someone pointed it out that it was rushed, pretty much because it was my first suicide story and im trying to think it through to extend it but i still can't think of something about it.

Recently a proofreader named Miner (Misty Dolphin's friend) pointed it out to me again but he proofread it and extended the part where Gallus kills himself.

So yeah the first chapter is extended if you wanna see it.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/442147/feeling-alone