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Talion The DARKandBRIGHT


~The true measure of a hero is that of a man who sacrifices himself for those who will never know.~ "Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends."

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  • 190 weeks
    A little help?

    So this is just a real quick thing I wanted to discuss with some of you all.
    I have recently been writing the next chapter that has a few sentences in a different language. What I want to ask is, how would you all be comfortable reading it?
    Should I write the sentence in English first and the other next to it?
    I haven't really thought of how to have another language added to certain parts.

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    8 comments · 211 views
  • 194 weeks
    Day by Day

    So, it's been a few weeks since I posted a new chapter. But I would like you all to know that I am still here and working on new chapters to release.
    I've just been busy with job hunting and other things.

    In the mean time, this is my first blog and I would like to use it to ask you all a few questions.
    How have you all liked my story so far?

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Aug
7th
2020

Day by Day · 10:36pm Aug 7th, 2020

So, it's been a few weeks since I posted a new chapter. But I would like you all to know that I am still here and working on new chapters to release.
I've just been busy with job hunting and other things.

In the mean time, this is my first blog and I would like to use it to ask you all a few questions.
How have you all liked my story so far?
How is my character development and how do you all feel about my OCs?
And lastly, do you all think I'm taking to long to progress the story?

Comments ( 5 )

No not at all, at least you're working on one story unlike the Mooks that have more than a dozen stories and next thing you know it. They make an excuse of writer's block. So my advice if I may give, is that you should take your time on this one good story.

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Thank you.
And no worries. I don't intend on writing more than one story at a time.

If you were speaking about the pacing of the story, it's perfect. A slow steady climb makes for the best stories. Never believe that an action-less chapter is unappreciated, In fact it's quite the opposite as it helps make the climax that much more enjoyable.

As for how I like the story it's awesome. It's hard to find an original story written as well as this one. Your current characters make sense within the story and I'm eagerly awaiting further chapters.

The only complaint I have is the first "allusion" to Christianity was ham-fisted however the most recent allusion was excellent.

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Thank you very much. I will be releasing a new chapter soon.

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