Story Feedback

Hey guys,

As you may or may not have seen, I published a new story called Beyblade: Metal Friendship. Some of you have already added it to your favorites lists and I really appreciate it. However, something I would appreciate more right now is feedback. I'd like to know what you guys thought of the story and how it could be potentially improved upon. Maybe even some ideas on where the story could go in the near future. Leave your thoughts here or in the comments of my story.

Thank you all and I look forward to hearing from you,
Speculore