New story idea. (It's about Star Wars! Hell yeah!) · 1:58pm Nov 23rd, 2012

It's a Star Wars crossover about a Miraluka Jedi Master, Thalos Rigalan, who has a unique ability with the force that allows him to see the past through certain objects. While on a mission he finds a strange artifact and when he touches it, he sees something strange. A planet at war (Changelings vs Ponies.), but one he's never seen before (Equestria.) Along with strange creatures unheard of (ponies.) he goes out in search for this planet to find it's an utter wasteland. A complete disaster, while there he finds the city of Canterlot, the last haven against the changelings in the war. he finds out that a thousand years after the war he saw, it started again, but this time the Changelings are winning. Thalos sees no other way but to convince the Jedi council to allow the Ponies to migrate to Courescant. After they accept, a certain pony takes a liking to Thalos, due to his heroics and way with the force. Her name is Rainbow Dash. After a while she decides to learn the ways of the force, after Thalos figuring out she's force sensitive, not knowing about the emotional/life changing part. She becomes Thalos' padawan and they have awesome adventures together, along with other ponies being involved in much of the story.

As this happens, a certain Sith Lord named Darth Desius, takes interest in Thalos' actions, he wants nothing more than Thalos' death after his apprentice was killed by Thalos himself. He seeks to destroy the ponies and Thalos.

Also, I can't decide between the cover art. Help me... please?

Do you guys like this idea?

It would most likely be written in either 1st person or 3rd person, in past tense. Either way, when I get an idea, I just have to do it. If you guys have any suggestions or questions, feel free to say in the comments. Either way, please tell me what you guys think. It's really important to me. Plus I'm often deprived of feedback anyways.

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