Zs'Skayr's Stories of Horror: Story #1, The Hauntings of Crystal Prep · 8:41pm Jun 1st, 2020
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, SPLAT! Hello everyone, it's so nice to see you all. My name is Zs'Skayr, and I will be your host for tonight's grand event or maybe your...ghost host. Even though it's not Halloween yet...well it's 4 months from Halloween, but that's not the point. What is important is that I'm going to share with all of you some of the scariest stories I have ever written as a fanfic writer. But before we start, however, I have a question to ask. What really happens after we die? Do we go to a beautiful paradise? Do we just stay in the ground as maggots feed on our flesh and bones? Or, do we stay on this earth as a restless spirit, never hoping to find peace? Well, The last question is the main point of my first little tale. A story about 6 students that die tragically and can't seem to pass on to the after-life. And worst of all, their killer is still at large, adding more victims to his body count. It's up to one teenager to help these spirits move on and to put their killer to justice. Well everyone, sit down, grab a snack and drink as I tell you the story of...THE HAUNTINGS OF CRYSTAL PREP!)
Plot: Sunset Shimmer was enjoying a nice and beautiful day until he stumbled upon an old abandoned school. She is told by Principal Celestia that it was the old Crystal Prep Academy, and was told that the school had to close down after five students were murdered by an ax-wielding serial killer, while the lone survivor was later found dead after reportedly hanging herself in her own dorm room. Sunset and her friends went to the school to investigate. They at first heard minor things such as eerie footsteps and screams of terror coming from the hallways. When Sunset found a still-working sink to wash her hands after touching some mold. In the mirror, she saw in her reflection what appeared to be a girl with purple skin, glasses, and a noose around her neck. The girl looked like she was in great sorrow, when Sunset asked her who she was and why she was here, the ghost girl only replied with "Help Me" and disappeared. That made Sunset flee the area, but what she didn't know is that some of the ghosts followed her home. Can Sunset solve this mystery, find the identity of the students killer, and help the spirits move on?
Protagonist:
Sunset Shimmer (Human World)
Pinkie Pie
Rarity
Fluttershy
Rainbow-Dash
Applejack
Antagonist:
The Canterlot Ax-man
Ghosts:
Sci-Twi (The Hang-Girl): She was the sole survivor of the Crystal Prep murders, but traumatic events like this take their toll on someone's sanity. No matter how many depression pills she is forced to take she couldn't unsee what she had witnessed that day, after being released from a mental hospital, she returned to her dorm room and took her own life by hanging herself. Her behavior is that she can be seen full of sadness and is crying on how she couldn't save the others. She is a kind spirit who will often help out with any work. Like when Sunset walked in for breakfast and saw that her food and beverage were all neatly placed on the table, that means this ghost is at work. She is often seen roaming classrooms and locker rooms trying her best to keep them nice and tidy.
Quotes:
"Help me..."
"P-please...Don't leave me."
"You don't have to be afraid...I'm just so lonely."
Indigo Zap (The Tongueless) Since she can't speak cause her killer cut out her tongue, she communicates through tapping to the walls like morse code. She is also full of sadness, because she tried to save her own skin like a coward instead of helping out most of the time. She is often found in the gymnasium. If you here either disembodied crying or the sound of a dribbling basketball near a hoop, you'll know it's her.
Quotes:
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(How could I be such a coward)
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(Who are you and why are you here)
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(Please do not leave me)
Sugarcoat (One-Eye) This intellectual spirit can be found looking at books around the abandoned library, she's like this because she doesn't know that she is dead. This ghost is often seen in the library and study hall rooms.
Quotes:
"Hey. Could I borrow a pencil for- Hello? Are you listening to me?"
"Am I invisible or something?"
"I may be missing an eye, but that doesn't mean i'm dead."
Sour Sweet (The Crawling Girl) The Crawling Girl is often seen near the stairwell, as she likes to crawl down to give anyone a good scare. This is because she was bisected by the ax-man, and crawled down the central stair-case as her organs trailed out before she died.
Quotes:
"Do you want to play with me?"
"Tag! You're it!"
"BOO! Heh Gotcha!"
Lemon Zest (The Laughing Girl) This mischievous spirit loves making practical jokes and pulling pranks, and will often hide certain objects in places their not supposed to be or just pileing certain objects together. If you hear disimbodied laughter, you'll know that she's here. She's often found in the cafeteria.
Quotes:
"HAHAHAHA!!! That was too good!!"
"You should have seen the look on your face!"
"Calm down. It's just a prank."
Sunny Flare (The Voiceless) You will often find this spirit in the nearby green house, keeping close eye on the plants. She like Indigo, cannot speak because her vocal cords were ripped out.
Quotes:
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(Do you want to watch the plants with me)
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(What do you think of these flowers)
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(Having fun)
5273485
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'm also going to put whenever Sunset touches the walls she gets glimpses of the schools dark past.
OMG!!!! YES, YES, YES!!!! SO MUCH YES!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT!!!! I literally just started my own haunted building themed story earlier today
Can I help you with the story in any way? I really want to help you in any way I can.
5273499
Sure, I'd be more than happy to have a little help.
5273535
Thx
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Ah, the Pennhurst Asylum in Spring City, Pennsylvania.
5273555
Oh, I didn't know that was Pennhurst, I was looking for a picture for a haunted school, and this is what I found.
5273544
Could you find pictures on what each of the ghosts would look like?
5273575
I'll try
5273578
Thanks a bunch.
5273578
Just to make things clear, this Sunset would be the human Sunset, not the Sunset from Equestria.
5273615
Okay
OMG! Those pictures were so hard to make!
When it comes theme. Why not something like these:
Could you also give some information on how the ghosts act? Don't spill the beans completely. Just give a little information and that should be enough
5273948
Ok, I'll do that. I'm trying to figure out what the human world sunset and the killer would look like.
5273951
You: *Says/writes the word 'killer'*
My mind:
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5273953
Thank you.
5273953
I like your choice, I was expecting the killer to look more gentlemen-like to lure people into a false sense of security before he kills them.
5273975
Still no description on how the ghosts act...(Sry, but i'm an impatient person)
5274036
It's ok, I'm just trying to figure that out.
5274036
I've made descriptions for each of the Ghosts.
5274048
Very good descriptions
Is it okay if I try to come up with some quotes for them?
5274103
Sure.
5274105
Also. Is that picture of the building going to be the cover art?
5274144
Yes. Do you have something else in mind?
5274150
I was just wondering
5274152
Oh, ok, I'm sorry if I sounded a bit rude. I was just wondering if another picture I could use as cover art.
5274156
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5274176
Are you still thinking of some quotes I could use for the story?
5274178
Yup. I'm writing them now. Just one question. Does Sunny Flare also use Morse code to communicate?
5274180
Yes.
5274182
Okay. Thx
Sci-Twi:
"Help me..."
"P-please...Don't leave me."
"You don't have to be afraid...I'm just so lonely."
Indigo Zap:
. . . . _ _ _ . _ _ _ . _ . _ _ _ . . _ . _ . . _ . . . . _ . . . . . . . . . _ _ . _ . . . . . . _ _ . _ . _ _ _ . _ _ . _ . _ . _ . .
(How could I be such a coward)
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(Who are you and why are you here)
. _ _ . . _ . . . . _ . . . . _ . . _ _ _ _ . _ _ _ _ . _ . . . . _ . . . _ . _ _ .
(Please do not leave me)
Sugarcoat:
"Hey. Could I borrow a pencil for- Hello? Are you listening to me?"
"Am I invisible or something?"
"I may be missing an eye, but that doesn't mean i'm dead."
Sour Sweet:
"Do you want to play with me?"
"Tag! You're it!"
"BOO! Heh Gotcha!"
Lemon Zest:
"HAHAHAHA!!! That was too good!!"
"You should have seen the look on your face!"
"Calm down. It's just a prank."
Sunny Flare:
_ . . _ _ _ _ . _ _ _ _ _ . . _ . _ _ . _ _ . _ _ _ _ _ . _ _ . _ _ _ . _ . . . . . _ . . . . . . _ _ . . _ . . . _ _ . _ . . . . _ _ . . _ . . . . _ _ .
(Do you want to watch the plants with me)
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(What do you think of these flowers)
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(Having fun)
*Phew* This took a loooong time.
5274266
These quotes look great. Thank you so much.
5274266
Ax-Man quotes: "The first person I ever killed was my wife, I don't know, she was nagging me to do the dish and without thinking I chopped her to pieces."
(To Cozy Glow) "Little girls shouldn't be wandering all by themselves, it could lead them to trouble."
"I can't believe I actually did it, I got away with murder. Six whole times."
5274306
Cool. Those quotes makes him seem really psychotic.
5274300
You're welcome
5274187
Creepy Ambience:
5274322
I don't mean to be rude, but did you comment on something? It said that it was deleted for some reason.
5274827
The comment wasn't good
5274828
Oh, Ok. So, what did you think of the I want to use as a creepy ambiance?
5274831
The Empty Doll is very good. I'm a sucker for creepy music boxes.
Nebula is like, it's okay, but not very effective on me.
Here is a few ideas from me:
5274841
Those music selections are good.
P.S. I have joined Darth Wrex's little Legion.
5276234
I have noticed
Because you’ve changed your user name i'm gonna have to remake that cover art
5277676
Ok.