Of course, this birthday is a little more melancholy seeing as how it's the first one since I lost my father last year.
Apr
30th
2020
I Really Need Help! · 9:06pm Apr 30th, 2020
I don't understand why people are so indifferent to me. All I'm asking is for someone to look over my story and point out the writing errors I made. Is that so wrong? Someone said they'd look over it last night, but they never got back to me. I've tried reaching out to a few people, but received no reply. Please, everyone! I need to get those errors fixed by Saturday, otherwise it'll be too late. I really want to do well in that contest, and I need that story to be perfect. Please, don't leave me hanging and watch the clock run out for me. Somebody, please help me.
So you just need someone to critique your story or are you just looking for grammar errors?
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Look at my newest blog. I don't need to worry about that anymore. Still, if you want to, you can check my story out.
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I've already read it before and gave it a fave. It was a very enjoyable read, but I'm also a big Lyrabon enthusiast.
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Could you also give it a comment? The story hasn't received as many of those I was hoping.
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No worries! I gotcha covered