Chapter 20, part 6 out

Finished. Definitely took a while. Would have been out earlier today if I didn't have to rewrite the last scene or two of it due to forgetting to save and accidentally backing out of the chapter. No matter, the ending of the chapter is the same and I think the rewrite helped me flesh out Dash and her parents meeting better cause that ending point existed there, but was radically different in tone.

I'm taking a few days off now cause this took a decent amount out of me cause I was balancing like all the plots and trying desperately to make them fit together okay.

Comments

[lillytheomegawolf]

Sweeeet.

Just as I finish my first full draft of chapter 13 CA I see this.
I'll just finish up a few things then have a good read

[Peridork]

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Cool take your time. It turned into like 9300 words by the end there so it might take a while. And sounds good. CA has been a fun and cute read.

[Replica Knight]

I'll continue after i read my story I'm busy with.

[lillytheomegawolf]

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Before I read

Twilight should give Lulu the kiss of life.
Ok, I’ll stop being wishful and go read..

[Peridork]

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Well have I got some news for you lol

[lillytheomegawolf]

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I approve
Just finished the chapter
But I approve.
Now let me find my Mac and I’ll type up a proper comment. I don’t wanna do that my writing on my iPad...