Rewriting A Traumatic Path

I'm going to rewrite the story A Traumatic Path and edit a few things, it may not be noticeable, but I'm going to improve the first two chapters.

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[Bronycommander]

Sounds good to me

[cccvvvttt]

Excellent. In my time writing, I've learned a lot from adding details and whatnot, (Even though it doesn't really show in my fanfics, but in my other works) So if you want any advice or anything, you could ask me

[ShirtMechanic]

5180210
I do have one question...

I have a hard time introducing the mlp characters in my stories since I recently started watching the show. How would you introduce the characters?

[cccvvvttt]

5180320
I would introduce them like this.

Twilight Sparkle is the smartest of the group and is a studious bookworm, who through the learning of friendship, became the princess of it. She is the element of magic, usually always studying it and trying to learn new things with it

Rainbow Dash is the Tomboyish Athlete, with a cool personality and is always loyal to her friends, making her the element of loyalty

Applejack is a hard worker, owning an Apple farm and being proud of it. She is honest with everypony, making her the element of honesty.

Rarity is a generous fashionista, always giving to others and rarely expecting anything in return, making her the element of Generosity. Her passion for making dress has caused her to make a career out of it, one that she enjoys

Pinkie Pie is an energetic party pony, who always seeks to make everyone else in the room laugh, making her the element of laughter. Though a bit crazy at times, she values all of her friends and would never leave them in danger. She Pinkie swears it!

Fluttershy is a nervous, yet kind pony. While she doesn't live in town, she does live near ponyville to take care of woodland creatures, which make her the element of kindness. Even though she can be shy, when it comes to it, she isn't afraid to stand up for herself or others

[ShirtMechanic]

5180332
Thank you, this will definitely help me with the story!

[cccvvvttt]

5180334
Also, are you taking down the story to make your changes?

[ShirtMechanic]

5180335
Yes, but I'm about to republish it. But only the prologue will be the only chapter up until I finished chapter 1 and 2