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Alex Warlorn


Just your average Brony who happened upon an idea that might actually turn out to be clever enough for guys to love.

Dec
26th
2019

orphaned story commission · 12:24pm Dec 26th, 2019

I said no new commissions. And I meant that. But I had a story commission recently canceled and I'm looking for a new writer for a simple MLP short story.

Basically, it takes place AFTER a very VERY long groundhog day loop story, and we never actually see the groundhog day loop. And they DON'T keep their cosmic level powers from the cycle!

It has to do with the mane six suddenly finding themselves 'mere mortals' (by their standards), and no longer being overpowered new-game plus titans for whom every villain is a game or a challenge at worst, but never an actual threat or true danger. And no longer able to play pranks with foreknowledge, etc.

And then having to ADJUST and ACCEPT the permanence of existence again, and the DANGERS of ACTUAL threats, not just going through the motions of disposing of the same "predictable" villain for the infinite+1 time.

Basically, going from a game with infinite freeze-state, to a rogue-like and how much shock there is from that.

And it's Sunset Shimmer, from her OWN experience living for more than a year in a time loop that help them adjust.

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This is based on "The Infinite Loops" right? I vaguely remember saying you would something about this concept in the comments of the MLP Loops here ages back.

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