To those who may be interested... · 12:21am Dec 17th, 2019
Firstly: No, I am not returning. Sorry, guys.
BUT
I do have something that may be of interest to some of you- and no, I'm not asking for money.
I've been slowly working on rewriting She's Gonna Kill Me! for a little while now. While I enjoy it overall, the dialogue could use some polish to get up to standard. It was good for the time, but overlong and needed less rumination on Marc's end. And since I've gotten some headway in that regard, I figured some of you would be interested in seeing the first chapter redone.
And here's the result of that effort!
All your support and criticism of my work has been invaluable, and it's helped my rewriting immensely. Some things will be harsher than before, and some things softened. I felt like Dawn -or Sunset, as she was once written- could use a bit more of a sympathetic view early on, while Marc is made that much more of an ass. See if you can recognize some people in this little segment- the cast never downsized.
Take care, y'all!
If nothing else it was nice to see you around again even if it was just for a few moments.
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Appreciate it, brother.
Bye dude.... God speed!