Not Our Sunset's Ending

I feel like I owe this to everyone, so here we go. When I started Not Our Sunset, I already had a pretty bad reputation of stories, and even avoided most of my usual writing styles. I did it cause I can't stand too much judgement. I know I sound weak, but if you look at my account you might notice things are missing. I've taken down a bunch of stories because I didn't like the way they ended and I didn't like the criticism. So when I started not Our Sunset, it took me like a week before I could post the first chapter. I was nervous. When I finally posted it and saw all the likes, views and reviews, I relaxed a bit and my writing started falling apart again. I'm still only trying to learn to pace out my stories, but I'm always moving so fast in and out of my head I tend to rush things. It didn't help that my mother had this belief that you shouldn't forget the past, but forgive it. I'm sorry if you guys didn't like the ending, but bear with me, please? I'm already working on a sequel. When it's out, I'll slow things down and make sure it's more enjoyable than Not Our Sunset.

-YellowHornBrony-

Comments

[Dr Mysterious Shade]

You know what they say about practice.

[YellowHornBrony]

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It makes progress? No such thing as perfect!

[pabrony]

Yay! Something to read during my lunch break!

[Dr Mysterious Shade]

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Hey whatever works for you, go with it.