Made a small edit to chapter one of MiE, fixed a little inconstancy that a reader pointed out in the conversation between Eru and Morgoth. Nothing big, just cut a few lines and added a few in place.
Today marks a full year since my descent into the world of spaghetti and shame that is fanfic writing. Looking back on this past year I can honestly say that these ponies have had a very significant impact on my life. I've grown as both a writer and a person, learned a few lessons worth writing to the princess about, and discovered my special talent. Yes, it's writing you dolt.
As you may very well know (though it's more likely you have no clue, as I only just realized this myself two days ago) in six days will be the one year anniversary of when I joined this site and set off down that glorious golden road which actually turned out to be yellow aluminum foil that is fanfic writing. Seriously, it crinkles like hell every single time a take a step, it's driving me
For everyone who actually read Emperor's Child in Equestria, at the behest of all the people who kept asking me how it ended, I finally decided to write out a summary of the events leading up from where I left out at. Here you go.
I like all the tension of him now being loyalist. It's more dramatic than funny, though
People don't seem to like him being loyalist because that's only natural. Loyalists are fanatical Knight Templars with a boner for genocide, no ifs, ands or buts. Traitors, evil as they may be, have a little wiggle room for a funny character.
And now we have the interesting conundrum: no, the new Anon is not a nice person at all. No, he's not the same person that they became friends with. However, it's his body, and they can't just summon the daemon back or anything, that would be straight-up evil. Their options are limited to giving him to The Sorcerer for Imperial Purification and a light spot of torture as penance, or killing him outright.
Also, I'm going to keep bugging you until that swell guy makes an appearance.
I like the new and the old anon. I did like the old one more though, he had more a more comedic way of doing things. I'd say keep the new one if you want more srs and keep the old one if you want more lols.
As far as plot twists go the new anon has a lot in the terms of a serious character who will fight as a solider, but I will always go out to the good ol Chaotic, Wub loving, Slanneshii that we've come to know and love. He's just to fun to leave behind and has become to important to the characters as he was before he went post-heresy loyalist. I stand fast by the old Anon.
I figured you were going somewhere with the new anon coming into the scene. I just figured the old anon would make an appearance in one way or another and you would bring back the main character we all know and love, even if he is a little 'demony'. I honestly have no idea where you were planning to go with this, so I am intrigued as to how this will all play out. Either way, this is one of my favorite fanfics
The reason i love this fic is because i have never laughed so hard at written text in all of my life. And this new Anon is not funny, or at least not nearly as funny. I vote to bring back the old Anon. And if i might suggest a way of doing so, i'd go whit that this new Anon is actually the real demon trying to tric everyone that it has been exorcised.
P.S Thank you for a great fic and hours of laughter (Pinkie would be proud)
Personally, I prefer the old Anon, but in my infinite wisdom, I have devised the ultimate solution to this conundrum. Who says old Anon needs a body to come back? Unless I'm very much mistaken, as a demon he can do what he wants, up to and including kool aid man "OH YEAH"-ing his way back into Equestria from the warp. Maybe Doomrider can give him a kick into reality when he inevitably gets sucked back into the warp? (Shrug) However you choose to do it, I'm just looking forward to the prospect of the two Anons getting into one of those anime "facing your dark self" duels, either for control of the body, or just for revenge against each other. Just my input, though. EDIT: As long as you're accepting criticism on your writing... Write faster.
im fine with it plus theres all those other space marines to keep the story interesting and of course DOOMRIDER!!!!
I like all the tension of him now being loyalist. It's more dramatic than funny, though
People don't seem to like him being loyalist because that's only natural. Loyalists are fanatical Knight Templars with a boner for genocide, no ifs, ands or buts. Traitors, evil as they may be, have a little wiggle room for a funny character.
And now we have the interesting conundrum: no, the new Anon is not a nice person at all. No, he's not the same person that they became friends with. However, it's his body, and they can't just summon the daemon back or anything, that would be straight-up evil. Their options are limited to giving him to The Sorcerer for Imperial Purification and a light spot of torture as penance, or killing him outright.
Also, I'm going to keep bugging you until that swell guy makes an appearance.
I like the new and the old anon. I did like the old one more though, he had more a more comedic way of doing things.
I'd say keep the new one if you want more srs
and keep the old one if you want more lols.
defiantly a twist my updates are rilly backing up so cant read new chapter yet
As far as plot twists go the new anon has a lot in the terms of a serious character who will fight as a solider, but I will always
go out to the good ol Chaotic, Wub loving, Slanneshii that we've come to know and love. He's just to fun to leave behind and has
become to important to the characters as he was before he went post-heresy loyalist. I stand fast by the old Anon.
'tis a good plot(heh) twist.
I figured you were going somewhere with the new anon coming into the scene. I just figured the old anon would make an appearance in one way or another and you would bring back the main character we all know and love, even if he is a little 'demony'. I honestly have no idea where you were planning to go with this, so I am intrigued as to how this will all play out. Either way, this is one of my favorite fanfics
The reason i love this fic is because i have never laughed so hard at written text in all of my life. And this new Anon is not funny, or at least not nearly as funny. I vote to bring back the old Anon. And if i might suggest a way of doing so, i'd go whit that this new Anon is actually the real demon trying to tric everyone that it has been exorcised.
P.S Thank you for a great fic and hours of laughter (Pinkie would be proud)
Personally, I prefer the old Anon, but in my infinite wisdom, I have devised the ultimate solution to this conundrum.
Who says old Anon needs a body to come back? Unless I'm very much mistaken, as a demon he can do what he wants, up to and including kool aid man "OH YEAH"-ing his way back into Equestria from the warp. Maybe Doomrider can give him a kick into reality when he inevitably gets sucked back into the warp? (Shrug)
However you choose to do it, I'm just looking forward to the prospect of the two Anons getting into one of those anime "facing your dark self" duels, either for control of the body, or just for revenge against each other. Just my input, though.
EDIT:
As long as you're accepting criticism on your writing... Write faster.