Hey, you. Yes, you! Want to preread some stuff?

So... I got a day off from work because of an illness and decided to put some words into a fic.

The fic is part of a much larger book that I'm planning to do some day; but, that story is set on another context. What i intend to do here is take some of the plot from that idea and put it in little shorts to submit them in this site.

in short, the overall story (set from a mlp point) goes about a human and Spike travelling through the world as they search for magical artifacts with the hope of finding a way for the human to get back home. the human at some point falls in love with spike and since that point the story focus on their shenanigans as they found more objects, fight monsters, discover new cultures and so on.

so, without futher a do here is the link

I intend to look for a proofreader later. but I wanted some feedback to begin with