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    Tears of a Princess - writers block

    Having trouble to write the next chapter for Tears of a Princess. I could really use some help. Anyone would be willing to give me a few ideas? After reading the part of the chapter, I have written already?

    Pm me, please

    Thank you.

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Jan
7th
2019

Tears of a Princess - writers block · 5:23am Jan 7th, 2019

Having trouble to write the next chapter for Tears of a Princess. I could really use some help. Anyone would be willing to give me a few ideas? After reading the part of the chapter, I have written already?

Pm me, please

Thank you.

Comments ( 3 )

Well, as one of the themes is tragedy, that is, it's a story where it does not end with happy ending, I have an idea (obs: it's a very long text!): Twilight manages to win Moneybags, but ends up terribly hurt by one of the Moneybags helpers for a knife they were using, one of the guards who were patrolling the Twilight castle by orders from Princess Luna, sees Twilight and Luna on the ground unconscious and injured, he then takes them to the Ponyville hospital, and then Princess Celestia will report what she witnessed. After Celestia learns this she goes to the hospital and goes to see how her sister and Twilight are. Upon arriving in the room where Luna and Twilight together, but in beds of different hospitals, she sees that Luna was with a wound and Twilight with many wounds in the body due to the fight with Moneybags, a doctor enters the room and Celestia asks him how they are, the doctor says that Luna is injured, but she did not die. Celestia was relieved by her sister, and then she asks how Twilight is, the doctor, with a sad face, he says she has many wounds on her body, and those wounds were very deep and Twilight did not survive. After Celestia heard this, she was very worried because her sister is still alive, but Twilight was dead. She knew that when Luna woke up and knew it, that is, she knew that Twilight had died, she would cry a lot and maybe even go into depression. When Luna woke up she lifted her head from the pillow and asked what happened to her sister who was with her. Celestia had been tense and did not know what to say, when she was about to say a doctor enters the room and sees that Luna was already awake, Luna sees the doctor and asks how she is, the doctor says that his wound was not so deep . Luna is relieved, she then sees that Twilight also in the same room as she and her sister, she then asks how Twilight is and asks how she is and asks if she will be okay.
The doctor is sad for a moment and replies that Twilight, unfortunately, did not survive, and was attacked from behind by a knife. Luna is shocked and very sad, because she can not protect Twilight because of being unconscious, and that has hit the core. Her eyes stayed in crevices of cats before she began to cry, Celestia notices her sister's eyes and worries that her sister will actually turn Nightmare Moon now.

After a few days, she was released from the hospital, and was in her room, crying with her head on the pillow. Someone knocks on the door of her room and she asks to leave her alone, but the door opens and her sister enters the room, and asks how she is. Luna, with eyes in cat crevices and with tears in her eyes screams at her that she should have been there, because if she had been there she could have avoided the death of her love. Celestia tells her that her guards had not informed her of the attack, only that Twilight and her sister were injured.
Luna lets out a growl, and with her magic pulls her sister from the bedroom and slammed the door to her bedroom. Then, she cries again, not knowing what else to do, she has lost her unborn foal and now his wife.

Celestia did not know what to do, she tried to talk to her sister and comfort her, but it was not going to work. Luna kept saying that it was Celestia's fault that his wife was dead now and that now she hated her for it. Celestia was beginning to really worry about her sister's behavior, this behavior was the same as Luna had expressed before she turned to Nightmare Moon.

Luna was still in her room crying, not caring anymore, she did not know what to do with her life, she lost the pony she loved most, and she blamed her sister and she began to show hatred for her sister, as before. She was feeling betrayed, that her sister was not there to protect her wife. She sensed the hatred she was expressing to her sister, and she did not care.


Celestia went to her sister's room, and slammed her hull softly on the door, but there was no answer, she then asked if her sister was there and opened the door. She saw that her sister was staring at her with a look of hatred, still with cat-slit eyes. Celestia approached Luna and told her that they must lower the moon and raise the sun. Luna was still staring at her, in silence, before shouting at her, her voice and Nightmare Moon's voice saying why she should, since her love died and she no longer felt like pulling the moon down.
Celestia was shocked at the words of her sister, because it looked like Luna was going to be Nightmare Moon again.
She replied that she should because she is the princess of the night, and that as a duty, she must lower and raise the moon.
Luna answered back, still in her voice and Nightmare Moon's together, saying that if she lost her wife, the subjects would lose the sun and the day. And with that statement, its wings are shaped like a bat, and its shape changes to Nightmare Moon.
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There ends the chapter, so in the next, is the confrontation of Celestia with Nightmare Moon.

4992662 those are very good ideas, thanks. Depending how the story goes and what people might want, I might change the genres of the story

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