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  • 589 weeks
    Writing is hard, especially for Twilight Sparkle's notes.

    I've been writing the latest chapter of "the tale of josh the upright elongated gorilla" for the past month now and all I can say is: damn this is hard.

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  • 592 weeks
    Don't know when one bit me, but evidently I am a hipster.

    Dorky glasses Check
    Tight jeans check
    wearing cloths my grandma bought me check
    No one has ever head of my favorite musicians check
    Urge to build a portable audio rig complete with portable amp check
    own at least one apple product check
    Drinking wine that is classy as fuck, strait from a winery no one has ever heard of check

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  • 593 weeks
    Hope you all like science babble

    Yes the writing for the next few chapters is well under way, and I have to say that so far the bulk of what I have been writing is thinly veiled scientific comparisons between earth and equestria, as well as some of the "technical difficulties" that a human would run into being there (having injuries) and living with Twilight Sparkle; Princess Celestia's most faithful student. The next three

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  • 593 weeks
    It's Writin' time

    Ok finals are over so I can finally get on with writing more chapters for my fic, I first have to transcribe some chapters from pen and paper to computer though, as well as draft out a general plot. My plan is to work on the next 5 chapters simultaneously so that they all fit together. When I finally figure out how to write a note as opposed to posting an actual chapter I will get some of the

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  • 594 weeks
    Habanero Shots

    Taking shots of hot sauce to wake up in the morning is not a good idea. Well least final today, afterwards poniesponiesponiesponiesponiesponies.

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Nov
3rd
2012

I've got science things to do!! Expect chapter three in a week! · 5:42am Nov 3rd, 2012

Recently my studies have picked up, and I've realized that I am not in fact a skilled writer. My grasp of grammar is as clumsy as Sweetiebelle attempting to assist Rarity at any type of task.
In spite of this, I do enjoy writing and am very interested in finishing my story. I've got chapters 3-5 planned out already, the thing that is really intimidating however is that my grammar and formatting skills need heavy improvement, I would also like to write in a more free style that is not as unnecessarily long as my current style. The titles of the next chapters are

#3 This might be really real, What's in the bag?
#4 At least she's a scientist, Interview with a human.

It might take them a while to get out as I will have to get them proofread and checked for grammar, but I would like to get the story rolling past the awkward "I can't believe this is happening" phase, it is really rather over done from what I can see, and I would actually like to get something going.

I can't say that it will be soon because studies do eat much of my time, but I am interested in improving the quality of my initial drafts so that they don't have to be revised several times for grammar and style. Any advice given is appreciated, I am not a writer by trade or study so if you feel that I am doing something wrong technically please let me know I'd be more than happy to hear any advice or constructive criticism.

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