Order of the Alicorn Update #13

Okay, I made better progress this time, but still not good progress.

I've basically upgraded from rewriting an entire paragraph for two weeks, to rewriting an entire scene for two weeks. Granted, it was a fairly large scene, over 2,200 words in length, but still just one scene.

Still I guess it's measurably better than last week, which means your abuse must have had some degree of effect. So please, feel free to hurl more of it my way this week to help me stay motivated.