Please Give Me Some Feedback On This Story · 7:59pm Jul 31st, 2018
Hello, everypony! I hope this message finds you well. For the last couple of days, I've been reviewing my story The Story Of Rainbow, and I realized...
IT's Really Out Of Whack!
Yeah, I know some of you may enjoy it. But to be honest, I actually didn't really plan this story. This was my first story I've ever written up here and it's not even complete. Queen Scootaloo is my second and I enjoyed that a lot more than The Story Of Rainbow. And to be fair, Queen Scootaloo was dark. Really dark. Send me a 
if you agree in the comments. There's currently a second one in my unpublished side of things, along with two more stories. One of them is about Twilight, which is just as dark. And probably something you wouldn't want to read. But I'm writing it anyway.
Anyway, I want to take a poll. I spend most of my time writing my original works(Jessica Collero, The Marino Program, etc.), The Lost One, Twilight Daylight, Mystery Scootaloo, and The Scoota Finale. But this story does not get that much attention because it's...well... boring to me. It doesn't even make me wonder what I'm going to write next. I might unpublish it and save it for later when the rest of my stories are complete. If I survive the harshness of America first. It's also very stressful for me to come up with ideas for this story to insert.
Comment below on what you think about this story and I will make my decision. There may not be an update for this story today because I want to get started on the next chapter for The Lost One, which will be unveiled tomorrow.
Thanks, guys.
Will it is up too you if you want to take it down but i know how you feel caues in one of my fanfics i am geting dored and i cant think of what to write to so ya
I love the story and I hope that it will be back soon