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    Huh, Haven’t done this in a while

    Well, random ass update time!

    First off, I’m working with an artist to get some art… and it’s going hand in hand with a rework of one of my stories!

    Titan is getting a series of one shots… you’ll have to wait to find out what they’re about~ But it’ll be quite fun I already know that~

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    Upcoming Story

    Due to a recent fasination, I'm going to be working on a story involving androids, a future Equestria... and the Mane six.

    I can give a few details of it, and am happy to take suggestions or requests prior to the production of the first chapter!

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    New art of an old character~

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    Holiday Season!

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  • 212 weeks
    Well Kiddos, it's time.

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Jun
1st
2018

Blinded Road Map ((Subject to change)) · 2:19pm Jun 1st, 2018

Alright, here's the low-down on Blinded. At least for what I've thought of. If you want something snuck in all of this is subject to change!

(Fetishes included are not final)

EDIT: Re-working this by removing chapter numbers. Now they'll show the 'planned' order, or if numbered X, they can be put in at any point in time.
If there are several characters in a chapter and any are underlined or boldened, or anyhting that makes them stick out (Besides Bard of course) then they'll be involved in any sex scenes. Otherwise just expect the other characters to just be used to advance to that point.

Time Line Guide: LETTERS= Character Arc, or common characters in that set of chapters.
LETTERS#= Order of arc
X= Can be put in at any point.
#= Next chapter to be made, no movement of this idea can occur.

1SLSU1: Starlight, Bard. (Full Package, We're in for the long haul :P)

PieFamily1: Pinkie, Bard. Pinkie Kidnaps Bard and takes him to see her family. Public Sex, Hard Riding, Spanking, Male Dom, Romantic cuddling, Meeting The Family.

PieFamily2: Marble, Bard. Virgin Sex, Love, Romance, Impregnation, Tit Sucking, Ball Sucking, Soft Bedroom Sex

PieFamily3: Limestone, Bard. Sleep Walking, Sleep Sex, Waking Sex, Anal, Rough Riding, Impregnation, Angry sex after Creampie followed by an undefined amount of creampies

PieFamily4: Pinkie, Marble, Bard, Maud, Limestone, Cloudy, Igneous. Hidden Handjob, Hidden Footjob, followed by an after dinner Threesome with further creampies, bjs, titjobs, and lots of sloppy love.

PieFamily5: Maud, Bard. Sex, Plain Vanilla Sex

PieFamily6: Maud, Pinkie, Marble, Limestone, Bard. Incest, Orgy, Impregnation, and all the fixin's.

X(Between Starlight and Sunset): Bard and the Mysterious Mare. Romance, impregnation, loving sex, soft sex, cuddling, snuggling, love... Just a romantic sex chapter with the mare who said she's been watching over Bard for a short time now.

X: Trouble Shoes and Bard Gender swapped Trouble Shoes, Romance, Love, Severe height difference, Date, Cuddles, Passionate sex

2: Dash, Gilda, and Bard. Rekindling a friendship, romance, Threesome, Beak job, oral, Dual wing job, Dual ass job, Thigh fucking, facial, cum bath, vaginal, anal, permanent housemate, Introduction into Gryphon culture.

T1: Twilight and Bard. (Straight romantic sex, along with cuddles, romance, and general love, no harsh fetishes here)

T2: Discovery! Twilight and Bard, with Celestia and Luna walking in on kinky stuff. (Spitroasting, Summons, Threeway, Anal, Vaginal, Oral, Deep throating, possibly double stuffing. (Nothing involving Celestia and Luna, they just watch it))

CL1: Bard, Celestia, Luna. Stripping, Examination, Touching, Denial, Teasing, Romantic Intentions, Cuddling and Nuzzling, Spooning, Sorry no direct sex here.)

CL2: Celestia and Bard. (Massive Breast and Ass Play, Public Sex (Like legit throne room sex), Bodily worship, Male Dom, Impregnation)

CL3: Luna and Bard. (Sleep Sex, both ways, Dream Play, Oral, Vaginal, Anal, Male Dom, Tit play, Bodily worship, Musk play, Ass play, Outdoor sex, Dream invasion, Dream sex, Creation of Three entities, Nightmare Moon, Daybreaker, and ?o?e?t?a )

X(After the Celestia and Luna stuff): Will our Hero Survive? Find Out Next Ti- What do you mean this isn't Dragon Ball Z? Bard, Nightmare Moon, Daybreaker, M?l?s?i?. (Attempted Fem Dom, Full Male Dom, Spanking, Punishment, Impregnation, Vaginal, Oral, Actual Marriage (fucking Bi-laws), Heir Making, Molestation, Public Sex, Public Gangbang, Cock transformation, increased cum production, Genderswapping, Futa... Holy Shit I'm insane aren't I?

Go ahead tell me what you think! I'm all ears for any ideas still, and if I need to push these back because a better idea comes along, or just can them all together? Even better! This Is a request fic. No need for it to all just be my ideas.

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Comments ( 16 )

How about we go to Gilda as well.

4874154
After a bit of royalty... Hey, I'll just add that as an upcoming one too!

4874156
Sweet. Hey, have you thought of doing a female Troubledshoes? No one really does stories for her as far as I know especially stories like this.

4874157
Of course! If there's anything in particular (gonna have to do a bit of research on that character) you want to see done with her go ahead and let me know. This is gonna be updated, or reposted as nessecary so it'll change constantly as things are done, or things are changed.

4874160
I'm hoping that she accidentally runs into Bard after having another failed relationship and he helps her out by talking and being nice to her. Also she's gotta be a least 7'5 cause she's a freaking Clydesdale dude.

4874163
I'll see where I can work that in. Right now the only chapter order set in stone is 18 being next. It's the 'finale' of the three parter with Flutters. I've got no problem with any new characters being introduced, it'll be a nice change to write for a new character even. Hm... After I finish chapter 18 I'll put more thought into where I want to work it in.

All of these seem pretty good at first glance but ill look into it in more detail later. Right now i would like to propose a chapter idea and since you asked if we would like to see more ladies i have something involving Starlight.
Now the events of this could be set before or after Twi's chapter. After a stressful visit to her parents, starlight arrives home feeling very drained so she decides to take a bath to loosen herself up a bit, she thinks back on the events of what happened and only now realizes she never managed to pick up a nice guy to spend some time with.
"i cant believe i forgot the main thing i wanted to do once i was done spending time with my parents and there were sooo many good looking guys aswell, thanks mom, really appreciate it"
Feeling frustrated she goes to her room and lays on the bed "guess the toys will have to do for now" she says. while this is going on bard arrives or is already in the castle and notices all the noise and sounds coming from the castle, running water, someone walking around and strange moans (for context bard doesnt know starlight lives here, reason being twilight never told him or just slipped her mind) he finds the room with all the noise(he does have really good hearing after all) and catches starlight pleasuring herself "who is this mare? twilight never told me she has a roommate, or she's one really confident burgler playing with herself in a strangers home." he confronts her almost giving starlight a heart attack, he tries to catch her with magic but star counters it with her own,this impresses him a little. They start up a conversation and explain to each other what was going on, star is a bit surprised that twily never mentioned her, as the two are getting along star checks him out from head to toe and a naughty smirk forms on her lips "looks like its my lucky day after all" she thinks to herself. and from here naughty things happen.
For the kinks:blowjob,deepthroat,69,boobjob,missionary,doggystyle,cowgirl,reverse cowgirl,anal,breast groping,tit sucking,creampie and cumshots on her breasts and face the order is not important it can be mixed up, she is very, very horny and wants the full package from him. I like to think when it comes to starlight she likes to take the lead in bed(i mean she was a dictator afterall) but let her partner have a bit of control aswell. Hope this caught your interest :twilightsmile:

4874433
Wooo boy. That's a lot to unpack. Like... holy damn that's a lot. Short answer for that? Yes. 100% Yes.

Uuuh, might... might have to save the lesbian play for a rainy day, or the dual wing job... Huh. Well, looks like at least one thing is changing :derpytongue2:

I actually intended Starlight to be introduced via well... the village. Something something, Bard, something something, sex, something something, reformation, something something, profit. But was struggling on how to implement it properly as... well this isn't an action packed adventure story.

But... to introduce her coming back from visiting her parents? My... that gives me an idea for Tempest (I refuse to call her Fizzlepop, Tempest is cooler, and I like cooler names). Well... I'll get to work on that right away!

(Heh and if I wait for the lesbian play there can be afoursome even sexier. And Fluttershy can break out a strap on and someone can get spitroasted... Huh... which is tastier, a roasted rainbow, or a tree? I won't know until I write it :P)

4874476
Oh dear,ok uhm...im honored that my idea gave you inspiration but i wasnt expecting you to jump on it instantly! I thought that it was gonna be the fluttershy 3 parter and after that or maybe more down the line my idea. The reason im saying all this, and its a mistake on my part so i apologise for not voicing it sooner is that i was also planning 2 more ladies for this little mini arc in the series. But i guess it could be worked around a little bit to not make it feel very out of order.
If your still interested and i havent made you go insane from all the info dump i gave you just give me a message and ill send them over.

4874692
This entire thing is always up for change, so there's no issues on my end. I can hold the Starlight chapter off for another few chapters. Just it was too interesting when I got off work to not start it.

The way I view this, the requests take precedent over my own ideas. This is a request fic after all :P

4874702
Sorry for the late reply, was just sorting a few ideas but it just got more complicated so im just gonna give the original draft i had.
Chapter 2 of the "Magical Ladies" (WIP) trilogy would involve Sunset (my personal favorite character)
This would start directly after starlights chapter, give it 1-2 days (poor guy has to recover a bit) bard can either visit or just hang out in the castle with star. While the two are having a chat bard notices a strange sound coming from one of the rooms and asks star what it is. A big smile forms on stars face as she recognizes the sound. "no way" she says and runs off "hey star wait, where'ya going" She enters the room and from an active portal a very familiar curvy,busty unicorn emerges, Sunset Shimmer.
Both of them greet eachother with a hug (like friends would do after a long time) eventually bard joins up and star introduces the newcomers to eachother. The two girls start chating and bard says "ill go and leave the two of you alone to catch up" to which sunset replies "oh no, you really dont have to" "its ok, you two must have a few stories to tell eachother, ill be around if you need me."
The girls start sharing their experiences of what went down up until now in their lives all that good stuff. During the conversation star notices that sunset is a bit "off" and ask: "tell me sunset, your not just here for a simple visit are you" she says with a smirk on her face. "wha.. what do you mean?"
"come on, i can tell your here cuz you want something "specific" so to say"
"ok fine, look, i....wanna get laid ok"
"i knew it" "but how did you even..." "your tail was twitching like crazy" "oh dammit all, i always forget this thing exists whenever im here" (this is just the rough dialogue i came up with)
sunset then asks if she could help her out a bit to which star agrees but asks why didnt she do this in the other world and sunset just says "well its kinda hard to find a proper partner over there plus the phisical changes and laws but lets not go into that, and i was craving something more "homemade". Than star says that shes in luck cuz there's a nice guy right here, to the whole idea sunset just says: "well isnt that convinient" with a dead-pan expression. They go looking for him but sunset has her doubts about the situation.
"trust me sunset your gonna love him" "im not so sure about this starlight, i mean from what you told he means alot to the other girls and i really dont wanna mess things up between them.
after a bit more talking and star saying its gonna be ok she doesnt need to worry they find him in one of the living rooms and star leaves them alone to get more aquinted. they start talking with eachother and sunset explains the situation, bard notices that shes still nerves and tries to calm her down telling that its not a problem at all and from here things start heating up. But as they are getting into it star suddenly shows up.
"I see the two of you are getting along fine, just wanted to say ill be gone for a few hours"
"wait" says sunset "you can join us if you want to i dont mind"
"nah i already took him for a test ride he's all yours for the rest of the day"
"you make sound like im your toy, dont i have a say in this?" bard says
"oh please dont try to pretend you dont enjoy being balls deep in a sexy mare sitting in your lap"
"touché" he says pointing a finger at starlight.
"anyway have fun you two, see ya."
Kinks:oral,cunilingus,boobjob,cowgirl,from behind against a table,on the table from the front,(after this they move on to one of the bedrooms)doggystyle,vaginal,reverse cowgirl,breast play/groping,passionate sex that gets rougher as they go,creampie,oral cumshot and one on her stomach and breasts that she ask from him and sunset also having a few orgasms along the way.all these can be changed up if needed.
When it comes to sunset she strikes me the kind of girl that is very passionate and treats her partner equaly in bed but also likes to go rougher if in the mood for it, she is a bit sex starved after all but this doesnt mean shes gonna let him take control and dominate her. Its just to adults having fun with eachother.
Oh boy, and i wanted to make this post and keep it short, well i failed. I cant help it, once the ball starts rolling my imagination goes wild. Again sorry, and if im asking too much than please tell me. Last thing i want is to overwhelm you with my crazy ideas.
I wanted to post the 3rd aswell but i think ill wait until you approve of this.

Anyway, thats all for now and have a nice day (or night, depending on when you read this)

4875850
O.O

A'ight. I love it! It's actually a great way to bring Sunset in as well... and if she's already ehhem... 'Friendly' with Bard, it'll make the EG universe transition a lot easier (the human M7 already knowing about him, along with any other women on the otherside).

Heh, I never actually thought about making the Twilight chapters a trilogy, but hey, first Starlight, then Sunset then Twilight... Mm, if all three of them are in the castle at the same time... Shesh, and I thought the most deadly trio would be Nightmare, Daybreaker and Mo- Eeeh, Forget the last one. She's nameless, won't name her until the time is right. Heh, death by snu-snu, what a way to go, right?

4875851
Im glad you like it, made a few corrections to the kinks (just a few errors i missed) and just a heads up, the 3rd lady is not twilight but someone else but ill get to that later once ill have more time, and dont worry this one wont be as long as the previous two, at least i hope so.

4875868
Oooh, don't worry. If it's long I'll still read it. And, not Twilight? I'm waiting eagerly for who else would be involved... but there are a few ideas in my head as to who it could be :P

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