Chapter 11 out · 7:46am May 24th, 2018
It's a shorter chapter than the last three or so but still nearly 8000 words isn't bad.
Definitely tried to add some humor at points, but the tone still is pretty heavy. Though adding Pinkie to any story automatically either makes the chapter a comedy or a sadfic.
This chapter isn't sad in Pinkie's parts and I kind of like the Applejack and Pinkie Pie talking to each other feel I got. Like I feel like she's still the goofy and slightly annoying at times Pinkie, but I got some good moments with her where she's not completely throwing a laugh a sentence.
Hopefully June isn't as jam packed with life stuff as this month was cause while it kicked me into gear to finish this chapter, I'm also exhausted- though not from writing. Still fun, and still relaxing. I'm going to bed though cause it's nearly 3 am here.
hey, 8k words is good, check out my new one shot, it's less than half that
I like that generalization of pinkie and either being sad or comedy. Kinda is true though.