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I like MLP, Undertale, anime, Kingdom Hearts, and other stuff! I hope to be friends with people here!

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Apr
24th
2018

Need some help! · 9:15pm Apr 24th, 2018

Hey, guys! I'm not getting a lot of likes from my story! So, I would like to know: How can I make Andrew/Android a much more interesting character? I welcome any advice!

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i wish i had advice, but i dont :raritycry: if i have any advice i'll let you know.

What i did was add my story to groups that made sense to add them in. Like Free at Last. I added that story too groups like adopt a human, human in equestria, you see where I'm getting at? The tags of yours says, Romance, Adventure, and Sad. Add those to those types of groups, and people should start to like it. Also, not all stories work out the first time. Free at Last was not my first story, did you know that? My first story was actually called Slender: The Watcher, but it got negative reviews, due to the fact that was my first story, and I wasn't really good at writing at the time. I'll read the first chapter, and I can tell you if there is anything you need to fix. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks! I'll still edit the first chapter and try to make the main character more interesting.

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