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Tethered-Angel


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  • 44 weeks
    Story Cleanup

    Hey guys! I just wanted to give you a head's up that I have removed a couple of stories from my page here on FimFic. I don't expect them to be missed, as they aren't my more popular stories and were largely experimental, but because I, personally, hate when a niche story I'm looking for just up and vanishes, I thought I'd leave an explanation here for you all :moustache:

    The stories are:

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  • 178 weeks
    Which Magnus Powers do the MLP villains belong to

    I wonder how big of an overlap there is between the MLP audience and the Magnus Archives. I don't imagine it's huge, but then, who knows! I'm rarely as original as I think I am haha. That said, the overlap between MLP, Magnus, and my followers probably is much smaller :rainbowlaugh:

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  • 233 weeks
    Art Post!

    I've been really trying to improve my art this year. With the year coming to a close, here's some of what I'm most happy with!


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  • 234 weeks
    The Wicked Witch of Wichita

    I ran across that Tumblr post again, about how witches and cowboys had a lot in common, and I was just too tickled by the idea not to obsess over it for the last two days. I've been going back and forth all day at work on how witchy magic might mix with cowboy culture, and honestly? It's awesome. It got a bit of writing out of me at least!

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  • 240 weeks
    Superpowered Angst- Original story

    Hey guys! I've been wanting to do some original fiction for a while now, and had a change to do a short piece in response to a Prompt over on Reddit. I was a bit late to the prompt and it didn't get much traction, so I thought I'd try my luck here even though it's not pony. Story stars some Superhero characters that I'm still kind of developing, and is a bit angsty as per the prompt, but I hope

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Applejack, you are trouble! · 7:52pm Mar 30th, 2018

I swear, I never have to do more research for a chapter than when Applejack is involved.



Chapter 9, I had to learn about hot water systems. Not just how they work, but what all can go wrong and how exactly you fix it! Fun fact, there isn't really a standard system, pretty much every building is different, at least on an industrial scale. Fortunately, the idea of a boiler room is fairly basic, and with so many possibilities it's hard to say any one is wrong haha. And admittedly, that was kind of interesting to learn.

Then during the Bad Day arc, I had to learn about apple harvesting! How apples are harvested, when, etc. And I didn't even get to use most of it :fluttercry: Of course I only did all that to make sure I didn't have them harvesting something in October that's only ripe in November, but still. Another fun fact, different types of apples have different harvest times, and apple farms tend to grow a variety of types for this reason. I dunno, that's probably common sense but it was interesting to learn.

Of course, that leads in to Chapter 21, and me learning about making cider! Which basically combines both of the other two, actually. Cider pressing systems are actually kind of like boilers, except with even more of a homemade element to it. So, I guess what I'm saying is no one can prove me wrong! Wahaha!

Honestly, this stuff is part of the fun of writing AJ, at least in Neighbors. She never was one of my favorite characters in the show, but she really is starting to grow on me in Neighbors :twilightsmile:

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Research! :twilightblush:

Fun fact about researching as a writer: when you do it correctly, most of the time, no one will be able to tell.
But if you don't, they will know :derpytongue2:

Also, those are not so bad. I'm pretty sure I must be on a few government watch list with some of the things I've been researching for writing.


Keep up the good work!

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True! I've definitely had to look up worse haha. She's still the one I've had to research for the most though, I'm just not all that good with handy stuff I guess :twilightsheepish:

That's what makes a story more enjoyable for us readers. A glaring mistake, even if very few of us would notice it, can pull me right out of a story. My knowledge of boilers is sketchy but AJ's explanation in that chapter sounded logical so it was satisfying to me. I'm a bit more familiar with cider pressing; we had orchards and a mill in my town and I'd watch the apples go in one end and the heavenly nectar I was going to take home come out the other, but without electric motors or Big Mac on a treadmill it looks like a lot of hard work converting about 1 bushel per gallon. And I know nothing about the hard stuff, it's only outside this country that the word conjures up an image of an alcoholic beverage, something that has gotten the show in trouble a few times in overseas markets.

Keep up the good work, I love where you're taking this cast of characters.

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Uh oh, I'd better bring my A game then :rainbowlaugh: I pulled up a couple of different how to guides for it, and actually it seems like a fairly simple process. Basically wash the apples, smash the apples, squeeze the apples, juice. Of course if you want nonalcoholic cider you have to add some other things, and I guess you have combine different apples to get the best results, which isn't too surprising. But yeah, kind of fun to learn about. And man, there is nothing like going to an apple farm for fresh squeezed cider :twilightsmile:

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