Art request redo pretty please!!?!

Hi, hello. Crimson Rose here. Now i'm gonna be blunt, I'm not the greatest artist around. I'm decent but not well done that I can use it as covers or still pics for my stories. I'm recently creating a little series between an oc pony named Ombre Nightfall and King Sombra. I haven't publish it yet for I am still in progressing the words. There are three stories, one is only one chapter and the other two are the main stories.

The three below for what I show is what I created and had posted on my deviantart.

That one is at the end of the first story of Sombra looking at Ombre with a pissed off look in the reflection of the mirror on the friendship express with her adopted parents Ambrosia - the pink pegasus - and Ranger Roll - the blue unicorn. Ombre is the little gray filly with purple mane, muzzle, underbelly and hooves. Ombre is a hybrid of umbrum and an actual pony sent to corrupt the Crystal Heart that has since gotten more powerful with Princess Flurry Heart being born. King Sombra was brought back to life by Radiant Hope but Sombra wanting revenge sets out to do just that when The Queen of the Umbrum, or "Mother" brings him back to the hive where all the Umbrum lie. He tries to tell Mother that he can reclaim the Empire but was too weak. Mother, since Sombra's defeat devise a plan to create an actual being that can withstand the power of the Heart, even in shadow form. With one of her best subjects and a poor victom mare, she made Ombre, coming up with a task to corrupt the heart. Once Ombre was old enough, she sent her out similar to how Sombra was thrown into the frozen north near the Empire. She gets inside the orphanage like Sombra... but things flipped when she gets adopted on the same day and was taken away from the Empire to live in Ponyville.

This is the cover of one of the two main series of the story. Sombra gets turned into a colt once more by his so called "Mother" To seek Ombre and guide her on the path she's meant to be... That mean for how long it'll take. The pic has Colt Sombra - still having his shadow like abilities, and little Ombre playing a board game while having a little picknick in the park. Ombre is about to win - and yes she calls him Bubba as in Brother because in the series, she sees sombra by her side growing up and thinks of him as a big loveable brother. And Sombra looking so miserable...the wooden dagger is meant to be a toy and that is self exclaimitory on how he doesn't like babysitting this sweet, horribly kind filly that's meant to destroy Equestria...(And yess that is her cutie mark, a crescent moon dripping away into the shadows with a star and swirls meaning of her magical capabilities)
But later in the series he starts to care for Ombre, even falling in love with her.

Now this is the second series. Ombre, as you can see, is a full grown mare with a few scars - that'll will come up in the first main series. She outside of the Crystal Empire, The red crystals - being the Queen of Shadows - is taking Ombre down to her realm because even when she unlocked Ombre's dark powers and had her remember her task, she refuses to do the task at hand because instead of being raised by hatrid and fear, she was raised by love and compassion and doesn't do the task. The Queen dragging Ombre to her realm to give her a dose of what she is and tries to force her to do the task at hand. The crystal heart above them has a solid black silhouette of King Sombra.

All three of them are mine but I am asking any artist if you could redo these three that it's presentable for publishing, you can even add more things to the background if you want. Now note, I do not have any money, which sucks because you guys will work so hard on doing this, but you will be rewarded. Not only I will credit ya'll for the hard work, but I will write a story that you will want me to write. It can be about anything, from adventure, slice of life, sci-fi, anthro, human, EG, crossover with anything in the multiverse. Hell I'll even do clop if that's what you want me to write.

Just PM me if you are interested enough. If I pick your pics, I'll contact you and can tell me what you want in the story. Pretty please and thank you!

And Yes I posted this at the art group. I just need put this up to help spread the word.