The Forlorn Moon Revisions

For people who are interested in reading The Forlorn Moon, I will be making revisions to sentence structure and potential punctuation errors. I am working on the finale for Act I, it's just taking me a long freaking time to do. I've been playing Stellaris and it has a terrible grip on me, it's like a damn drug at this point. Nothing is more satisfying than shattering worlds with my planet cracker.