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Saro0fdemonz


just another brony with random story ideas.

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  • 154 weeks
    My Stories

    It's common belief that I have abandoned a select set of stories but I want to point out that this is not true. I had some ideas that required me to put a few things on hold and I am slowly working my way towards them and will be more than happy to release more when things are well and ready. Sadly this may take quite a bit more time and I don't want to spoil things as I have been working on this

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  • 169 weeks
    So about that story(MATURE)

    So the clop story is coming along well but I have one issue I have to decide.

    First Person?

    or

    Third Person?

    Story is Human X Pony and Pony X Pony, etc etc. There will be multiple chapters and an ongoing plot. Will mostly follow the point of view of the main characters

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  • 170 weeks
    Shameless story on the way

    Shameless clop story for the sake of clop but with story elements because ideas refuse to leave my brain alone and the more things I write the more ideas I get and the further my other stories go.

    TotallyNotJustTryingToMakeExcusesInOrderToWriteClopIdeasThatHaveBeenStuckInMyBrain.

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  • 170 weeks
    ITS UPDATE DAY

    Dunno what came over me but I decided to go ahead and post the next update for Discovering Friendship. I had intended to do more with the chapter but ended up just focusing on one thing instead. I'm still happy with how it turned out and it leads into a few things I want to expand on in the story anyway. Especially when it comes to a few specific characters.

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  • 171 weeks
    Discovering Friendship

    Yes, the new chapter is in the works.

    But I've been busy bouncing around ideas for the future of the story. Things that I am very very very excited for everyone to get to read later on. A LOT is planned.

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Oct
12th
2012

I have done nothing productive all month (WITH MATURE SCENES IN BLOG POST - NOT CLOP) · 8:09pm Oct 12th, 2012

So work has been insane, life has been insane, and everything else is just falling apart for me right now, which is why I haven't written anything lately. Between helping my family, managing bills, BS at work and ATTEMPTS to sleep, i get nothing else done. But i'm off today and I can't sleep so i'm doing a bit more writing and hope to have something updated soon. For now, I thought i'd throw a teaser your way. Those who have read the beginning of Pipers Tale already know he lost someone important to him while he was gone for those 5 years. Well heres a sneak peek at what happened


Piper tugged and pulled, trying his hardest to pull himself free. He sighed and lowered his head, realizing he was good and stuck. The Gryphons had learned their lesson and had even tied a rope around his midsection. The Gryphon King stepped forward, glaring at Piper with his good eye.
"So Loyalty, you've seen fit to return. Good, you are just in time for the show."
"What show?" Piper asked with a half smile. The Gryphon king grinned, stepping aside so Piper could see a young pegasus mare tied down to a wooden table, her wings stretched out wide and nailed into the wood. Piper could just barely see that they were torn, most likely pulled to the point of ripping out of her back, barely clinging to her body. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she sobbed and squirmed.

"CHERRY!" Piper screamed, he turned his attention back to Monoclos.
"LET HER GO! You have me! You don't need her!" he screamed.
"Oh but I do need her Loyalty. Because she is important to you, because it hurts you when I do this." the king drug a claw through Cherry's stomach, leaving a long trail of blood behind, the pegasus screaming in agony and throwing her head back.
"STOP IT!" Piper screamed. The king smiled, lowering himself to the young pegasi's ear.
"Do you see now pegasus? He cannot save you. He cannot keep his promise. He is useless, weak! As are the rest of your kind."

"No...y..your lying...h..he'll sa..save me..." she sobbed, she glanced over at Piper, begging with her eyes. Pipers eyes met hers and he fought back his tears. Somehow he had to get out of this, somehow he had to save her. He had to keep his promise! He took a slow breath and gritted his teeth, pulling on the ropes that held him. He threw his weight forward, his wings shifting out of place with a loud pop. He gasped in pain and threw out his wings, snapping the rope and popping them back into place. The King smiled as Piper slipped his hind-hooves free, his fore-hooves still held tightly in the rope. All the while Cherry watched him, a small smile on her face. Piper stopped as a blade rested against his neck. The king slowly walked up next to Cherry, placing a claw against her throat.
"I wonder which one of you will bleed out first." The king grinned, dragging his claw across her throat.

"NO!" Piper screamed and threw his head back, smashing it into the Gryphon behind him. He flapped his wings as hard as he could, dragging the pole that held him to the ground with him as he made his way to cherry, but he knew he was too late. The King tackled him to the ground, hefting him up by his throat and forcing him to watch as Cherry's body thrashed about, blood pouring from her neck onto the table. Piper lowered his head as Cherry finally stopped moving, her eyes on him, asking him why. Why he didn't save her. Piper felt tears sting his eyes, shaking as King Monoclos held him.
"Good, you've finally broken. You will live for now Loyalty, long enough for Celestia to witness what you've seen."

"No..." Piper said softly.
"What was that Loyalty? You still have some spirit left in you?" Piper threw himself back against the king, roaring as his eyes faded to a bright blue, a spear of ice rising up from behind them and slamming into the kings back, the spear stabbing through him and into Pipers back. The gryphon army stared in shock as the two slammed into the ground with the spear nailed through them.


This is the current unedited first draft of The death of Cherry Blossom who was killed to anger and break Piper. I hope this is enough for now for you all to forgive me for not updating my stories and I hope to have more for all of you soon. Also keep an eye out for Piper in Dinky Who! Oh and Side-note, the next couple for How they met will be Spike and Rarity.

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Just take your time We can wait for the awsomeness to continue for a bit longer :twilightsmile: and all the other things

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