A story I might write · 5:39am Aug 15th, 2017
I thought up a story idea and started writing randomly once. Do you guys think its any good whatsoever?
Holy shit... I know I shouldn't be panicking and I probably need to calm down, but its just to much... Its as if a few minutes ago I was with my friends getting ready to go down the ledge and then I was plummeting down and smashed my head on a rock... My head... Their was a a bandage on it... Oh my god... Oh no, no, no, no, no... Who could have done this? Why would any pony do this! Did some pony do this? The only good thing going for me was that my saddle bags were mostly untouched and I still had my food, water, a bedroll, a tent, a knife, three towels, and some simple climbing gear. Something really bothered me about this... Why would some pony do this and if no pony did... Bowed I get here and bandaged up too. I had no medical supplies in my bags. God the more I thought about it the more it creeped me out.
I should probably start moving now. Their are only two paths and one I hear something from. I listen a little closer and it sounds like... Whispering? Wow that's creepy. Its probably best I go the other way.
A few spelling errors other then that good start. Write it.
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Its unedited so that makes sense.
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Al's here's the summary too
Summary: "Hello?" is about a young mare who fell down a hole with a group of friends while exploring a cave in the ever free forest. She has gotten lost in the deep winding tunnels of this mysterious ancient cave where some one else is following her. All she knows is that their the reason why she woke up in the deeper tunnels and with only a light spell to guide her dark journey ahead, she begins
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This is geting exating! I really whant to read it now.
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May or may not be in second person. Probable not what do you think?
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It depends on the story. But it can work.
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That's not really a yes or a no.
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Yes.
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OK I won't then