• Member Since 1st Jan, 2017
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Halo456


I am a newcomer to this site and my first story's on a public site hope you like what I write

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  • 332 weeks
    What I Need To Improve Upon In My Story's

    This is what I need to improve upon in my opinion to make my story's that I make well liked and enjoyed to be read.
    1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement.
    2. Make the story more appealing to the audience.
    3. More character development and background information about them.

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  • 332 weeks
    New chapter

    A new chapter of my story Fallout Equestria: a soldiers tale is out and closer to the end of the chapter I have greatly improved my skills as a writer and I hope you can tell well see you all next time I upload anything

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  • 338 weeks
    I want to know

    I want to know how do you guy's like my story's so far and what I need to improve on because if you guy's don't tell me then how do I know what to improve on but once you do then I will be glad to improve it and any requests for chapters and how long they should be. Look I just want to get some feedback on what I am doing and if I am doing it right that is all I ask for you guy's is some feedback.

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  • 338 weeks
    I Am Back Ladies and Gentlemen new chapter of Fallout Equestria a Soldiers Tale is out

    Go and see the new chapter I have published sorry that I have not updated anything as of late because of school and finals are coming up so I will not updated anything until finals are over but besides that see you all next time I update or upload something on this site.

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  • 347 weeks
    New chapter this weekend was busy last weekend

    New chapter of the Creators Story Act One is coming out this weekend on Sunday or Saturday it is a regular chapter but it probably will be 1,400 words just to lengthen out details in the story. On Sunday I plan to publish a chapter for my Fallout Equestria story which should be 2,000 words long since it is an important chapter.

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Jul
17th
2017

For the chapter thirteen for the Creators story act one · 2:43pm Jul 17th, 2017

For how long this will be it will be as long as 2,300 words long or more now this is before the battle starts so there won't be that much action but I hope you will like the chapter sorry that I was not online that much I have been doing chores around ware I live for some money but all I have to do is a couple more jobs and I should be good then I can get back full time on my writing the first story that I will finish is the Creators Story Act One so look forward to more chapters coming out. See you all next time have a good rest of your day

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