What I Need To Improve Upon In My Story's · 12:32am Jan 24th, 2018
This is what I need to improve upon in my opinion to make my story's that I make well liked and enjoyed to be read.
1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement.
2. Make the story more appealing to the audience.
3. More character development and background information about them.
4. Fix the problem of my Google docs not working so an editor can edit my story.
5. Make the lore more evident.
6. Research more about guns and the workings of guns so I can be more accurate with my details in the story.
7. Have more struggle for each character in the story.
8. Have longer chapters but this will be difficult due to the limited time I have each day or my laziness comes back.
9. Not make main characters overpowered.
10. Plan out the story's before writing them
11. Reach out and ask for help from time to time mainly because I am pretty stubborn when it comes to writing my story's.
12. Make sure that everything is going to be alright and that the story is not sunshine and rainbows but make it reality.
13. Be more detailed of the soundings around the characters.
14. Make conflicting situations for the characters and have a good or bad outcome and how that will affect them and the people or world around them.
Now then feel free to add to this list on this story or my main page when you click on my username. I can take criticism and take that advice and put it to work so don't think that I will ignore you or use the advice you gave me I will use it and put it to good use.
