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Halo456


I am a newcomer to this site and my first story's on a public site hope you like what I write

Jan
24th
2018

What I Need To Improve Upon In My Story's · 12:32am Jan 24th, 2018

This is what I need to improve upon in my opinion to make my story's that I make well liked and enjoyed to be read.
1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement.
2. Make the story more appealing to the audience.
3. More character development and background information about them.
4. Fix the problem of my Google docs not working so an editor can edit my story.
5. Make the lore more evident.

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Jan
23rd
2018

New chapter · 12:19am Jan 23rd, 2018

A new chapter of my story Fallout Equestria: a soldiers tale is out and closer to the end of the chapter I have greatly improved my skills as a writer and I hope you can tell well see you all next time I upload anything

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Dec
12th
2017

I want to know · 3:11am Dec 12th, 2017

I want to know how do you guy's like my story's so far and what I need to improve on because if you guy's don't tell me then how do I know what to improve on but once you do then I will be glad to improve it and any requests for chapters and how long they should be. Look I just want to get some feedback on what I am doing and if I am doing it right that is all I ask for you guy's is some feedback.

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Dec
8th
2017

I Am Back Ladies and Gentlemen new chapter of Fallout Equestria a Soldiers Tale is out · 2:03am Dec 8th, 2017

Go and see the new chapter I have published sorry that I have not updated anything as of late because of school and finals are coming up so I will not updated anything until finals are over but besides that see you all next time I update or upload something on this site.

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Oct
11th
2017

New chapter this weekend was busy last weekend · 9:51pm Oct 11th, 2017

New chapter of the Creators Story Act One is coming out this weekend on Sunday or Saturday it is a regular chapter but it probably will be 1,400 words just to lengthen out details in the story. On Sunday I plan to publish a chapter for my Fallout Equestria story which should be 2,000 words long since it is an important chapter.
And do not read the chapter until it is done so if you see that red dot next to the chapter that means that it is not finished so don't pls don't read it.

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Oct
11th
2017

New chapter this weekend was busy last weekend · 9:51pm Oct 11th, 2017

New chapter of the Creators Story Act One is coming out this weekend on Sunday or Saturday it is a regular chapter but it probably will be 1,400 words just to lengthen out details in the story. On Sunday I plan to publish a chapter for my Fallout Equestria story which should be 2,000 words long since it is an important chapter.
And do not read the chapter until it is done so if you see that red dot next to the chapter that means that it is not finished so don't pls don't read it.

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Oct
2nd
2017

Not done not ever not kidding · 10:15pm Oct 2nd, 2017

I am dead serious this time I will not give up not back down even to my own laziness I have been slipping up way to many times in class on this website and on my schedule. So this is it I draw my line and here are my conditions from now on to this channel. I will update only two story's a week with only 1,000 or 1,300 on regular chapters but on major chapters there will be 2,000 words and I am not kidding here. But I will plan to make a new story but it will not be released until this weekend

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Sep
19th
2017

It's Time To Call Out My Bullshit · 9:53pm Sep 19th, 2017

I have lied to you guy's about so many things and broken promises to myself. Like I said I would type out 10,000 word chapter but I did not because I got lazy and I don't have the time of day or night to write that long. Same thing to that I would write all the chapters I publish to be 2,000 words long I just don't have time in my schedule or life to write that long I could if I was out of school at summer break but that's over. So I have to focus on school and my life so when I do publish

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Sep
19th
2017

New chapter · 12:54am Sep 19th, 2017

Chapter six of my Fallout Equestria story is up so go check it out

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Sep
17th
2017

Not quitting on my story's · 11:02pm Sep 17th, 2017

I will start to write chapters on the creator's story act one which will be next week. On my Fallout Equestria story I plane to write 72 chapters which will take some time starting now I will write each chapter 2,000 words long which will take one and an half days long (mainly because of my laziness.)

So that is the update for today

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