Update!!!

Im still working on the chapter! I promice! Its been tricky for me to write with both home life, work life, and subject. But I am getting though it! I PROMISE!

anyway have a snippit (with all spelling grammar and other errors intact!) (after the break for gore reasons)

Emjay gently reared up to look through the window, resting her forelimbs on the narrow ledge. She gave a brief squawk as the door swung quickly open depositing her back on all four hooves.  The first thing that she noticed was the smell of fresh blood and raw meat.  As she lifted her head she then noticed the disemboweled corpse of a mottled brown earth pony.  Tubes of intestines pooling from the gaping gut wound steamed in the cool air.