• Member Since 1st Jan, 2017
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Halo456


I am a newcomer to this site and my first story's on a public site hope you like what I write

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  • 332 weeks
    What I Need To Improve Upon In My Story's

    This is what I need to improve upon in my opinion to make my story's that I make well liked and enjoyed to be read.
    1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement.
    2. Make the story more appealing to the audience.
    3. More character development and background information about them.

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  • 332 weeks
    New chapter

    A new chapter of my story Fallout Equestria: a soldiers tale is out and closer to the end of the chapter I have greatly improved my skills as a writer and I hope you can tell well see you all next time I upload anything

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  • 338 weeks
    I want to know

    I want to know how do you guy's like my story's so far and what I need to improve on because if you guy's don't tell me then how do I know what to improve on but once you do then I will be glad to improve it and any requests for chapters and how long they should be. Look I just want to get some feedback on what I am doing and if I am doing it right that is all I ask for you guy's is some feedback.

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  • 338 weeks
    I Am Back Ladies and Gentlemen new chapter of Fallout Equestria a Soldiers Tale is out

    Go and see the new chapter I have published sorry that I have not updated anything as of late because of school and finals are coming up so I will not updated anything until finals are over but besides that see you all next time I update or upload something on this site.

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  • 346 weeks
    New chapter this weekend was busy last weekend

    New chapter of the Creators Story Act One is coming out this weekend on Sunday or Saturday it is a regular chapter but it probably will be 1,400 words just to lengthen out details in the story. On Sunday I plan to publish a chapter for my Fallout Equestria story which should be 2,000 words long since it is an important chapter.

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Jun
27th
2017

I will try to find an artist for my story · 10:25pm Jun 27th, 2017

For the rest of the story I want to have an artist to draw and paint images for the creators story act one but it will take some time and I do not think that a random person is going to take me up on this offer anytime soon. And the reason behind this is that I want to have a clear picture of what is happening in the story. And me describing it is well boring. So I wanted for the story a picture to show each large event of the story like the attack on Canterlot or how my character looked when he was spawning all of his weapons and gear. So yes I do need a artist. Also I would like to thank my editor Jay Tarrant for helping me out for my story so far. See you all next time have a good rest of your day.

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