Rewritten · 5:41am Jun 24th, 2017
I have finally finished the first chapter rewrite on The Flightless of the Fighters. Please give any feedback that thou thinks would help my story (including corrections on grammar and such).
"If you agree with me then why aren't you nodding HARDER!?" Trevor, March 20th, 2010
I have finally finished the first chapter rewrite on The Flightless of the Fighters. Please give any feedback that thou thinks would help my story (including corrections on grammar and such).