This is what I need to improve upon in my opinion to make my story's that I make well liked and enjoyed to be read. 1. Improve writing skills and formatting which is now done but there's always more room for improvement. 2. Make the story more appealing to the audience. 3. More character development and background information about them.
A new chapter of my story Fallout Equestria: a soldiers tale is out and closer to the end of the chapter I have greatly improved my skills as a writer and I hope you can tell well see you all next time I upload anything
I want to know how do you guy's like my story's so far and what I need to improve on because if you guy's don't tell me then how do I know what to improve on but once you do then I will be glad to improve it and any requests for chapters and how long they should be. Look I just want to get some feedback on what I am doing and if I am doing it right that is all I ask for you guy's is some feedback.
Go and see the new chapter I have published sorry that I have not updated anything as of late because of school and finals are coming up so I will not updated anything until finals are over but besides that see you all next time I update or upload something on this site.
New chapter of the Creators Story Act One is coming out this weekend on Sunday or Saturday it is a regular chapter but it probably will be 1,400 words just to lengthen out details in the story. On Sunday I plan to publish a chapter for my Fallout Equestria story which should be 2,000 words long since it is an important chapter.