Chapter Seven: First Draft Update

Ten-thousand words, holllllly crap. This one got wordy.

I'm definitely going to be trimming this down a bit, or at least cleaning it up substantially. The extra edition for this one comes from the greater description needed for a few scenes and the additional perspective of Twilight. There's a lot of little bits of world-building too that are dropped every so often throughout the whole chapter which is rather nice.

So yeah, I'm going to begin running it through Grammarly a few times over and begin the whole initial editing sha-bang.