Submit Your Original Character( Fifth Edition) · 5:40pm May 15th, 2017
The Fifth edition of submitting your character. With the Third season of Equestrian Heroes coming to a close, now more then ever is it time to submit your original characters. Some have been featured heavily like Thunder Quill or Candy catch'em and Amber while others like Quick Fist or Arctic had semi to minor cameos. When will they be featured more? Who knows?
All I can tell you is that there will be more Equestrian Heroes story. An alternate universe and a few holiday based spin offs. So if you're looking forward to see your original characters featured be sure to submit them here. And if you've already submitted a character, but want to update their information you can also submit them here.
They can have a connection to canon characters or another OC. (Nothing ridiculous though) Just feel free to submit what you think is right for the process. All I ask is a sensible background or name. If you're submitting an OC, Don't use your real or fimfiction/fanfiction name. The information needs to make sense for the setting. And for those who are wondering, I am adapating the comic and equestrian girls to the plot line.
And sense I am adapting nearly all fimfiction cliches or unusual to either make fun of them or deconstruct them (Like I did the whole Pinkamena and Surprise bit) that means you can even submit your versions of anon or human in equestria ideas for deconstruction.
If I am missing anything that can be added to the Bio please let me know.
Can be any species.
Zebra, Donkey, Dragon, Pony, Griffon, Human, Diamond Dog. Feel free to submit any species.
Name:
Nicknames:
Date of Birth:
Height:
Weight:
Gender:
Sexual Orientation:
Age:
Mane:
Eyes:
Species:
Fur or Furless:
(Body type) Maybe they have scales or smooth skin:
Cutiemark if Pony:
Wing Span if Avian based:
Pattern if a species like Zebra
(Tribe) Are they one of the three pony types? Maybe they are a serpent or a winged reptile? Here:
Measurements/Body Type:
Educational Background:
Personality:
History/Backstory:
Weapons:
Abilities:
MILITARY Background
Private
2ndPrivate
Private First Class
Specialist/Corporal
Sergeant
Staff Sergeant
Sergeant First Class
Master Sergeant
First Sergeant
Sergeant Major
Command Sergeant
Major Sergeant
Major of the Army
Here is the Navy
Ensign
Lieutenant
(junior grade) [2] and [3] Lieutenant
Lieutenant Commander
Commander Captain
Rear Admiral (lower half)
Rear Admiral [2][3]
Vice Admiral
Admiral
Fleet Admiral
Admiral of the Navy
And Air Force
Airman
Basic Airman
Airman First Class
Senior Airman
Staff Sergeant
Technical Sergeant
Master Sergeant¹
Senior Master Sergeant¹
Chief Master Sergeant¹
Command Chief Master
Sergeant Chief Master
Sergeant of the Air Force
Update on Arctic Night
New clothes: a dark blue jacket, black and dark gray striped shirt under it, lighter blue jeans and light gray longwings shoes. Like what this guy wears (minus the sunglasses.)
Weapons: A shield to defend him from physical and magical attacks and has one attack sword carrying on his back.
History (warning this might be long): Arctic's father was a brave pegasus and was with the Solar Guard. He died during a failed negotiation attempt between Princess Celestia and the King of the Centaurs. At that time Arctic's mother (who was a Unicorn living in Canterlot) gave birth to Arctic but died after she heard the news about her beloved.
Since Pegasi are usually not welcome in Canterlot unless you're a guard, Arctic was taken into an orphanage in Cloudsdale. His life as a filly had its ups and downs like any other. He got his cutiemark when he finally stood up for himself against bullies and learned he was quite skilled in defending himself after a confrontation with the bullies.
He once stood up for Fluttershy who also got bullied. When Rainbow Dash came around, Arctic distanced himself from her, believing that Rainbow would be a better friend for Fluttershy then he would ever be. As Rainbow did her Sonic Rainboom, Arctic was in the crowd with the other fillies cheering for her. It was then that he tried to became a better flier and started attending more flight camps and other sports, which lead him to his interest in swimming.
As the years went by, poor Arctic never got adopted and becoming of age he was forced to leave the orphanage after his graduation at Cloudsdale High. During his Graduation Party, he became friends with Vinyl Scratch the DJ of the party. Telling her about his plans in Manehattan, Vinyl gave him the key of her old room there. He was allowed to use it till he graduated from college there. It's also there where Arctic became friends with Time Turner.
When his college years ended, Time Turner invited Arctic to stay in Ponyville for a while, which made him feel like he was truly home, he decided to move in the old mill from Ponyville. Living in Ponyville now, Arctic quickly became friends with Lyra and Bon Bon and of course Pinkie Pie, who gave him a welcome party when he settled in.
Arctic worked in the weather factory, creating snowflakes until Naruto became Captain of the Lunar Guard and that he needed new recruits. Not wasting time, Arctic flew off to Canterlot.
He got lost in Canterlot when he tried to find his way to the recruitment station. Arctic asked a Unicorn to help him, who was called Minuette and she gladly showed him the way. While leading him there, she and Arctic had a nice conversation with each other and it was Minuette who got Arctic to get even more interested in art and Jewels, since his graduation in Manehattan.
When he got accepted in the Lunar guard and during his free time, Vinyl invited him over. There she introduced Arctic to her best friend and fellow roommate: Octavia Melody. During their conversation, Arctic learned that Octavia plays the cello and he told her that he plays the piano a bit. They meet up regularly to play a duet with the Piano and Cello. During their first time playing together, it was then that Arctic felt more than just friendship for Octavia.
Arctic has a busy life as a Lunar guard, during his free time he makes time for all his friends or goes training or following extra defense lessons from Captain Naruto or makes trips to musea's and concerts or makes a draw of a landscape or other ponies.... All in all, Arctic was happy with his life, he just wished that his parents could see him now. But he knows that they are proud of him. Every month Arctic visits their graves and places a bouquet of flowers on them.
Ok, that's a long history/backstory I know. You don't have to use it in your story. I just wanted to give you an idea on how things turned out for Arctic.
Name: Crimson Moon
Nicknames: Red, fireball (Family only)
Date of Birth: 3rd May 1990
Height: Five foot five
Weight: 160
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Bi
Age: 25
Mane: Red with yellow streaks
Eyes: Heterochromia (Left eye red, right eye blue)
Species: Pegasus
(Body type) Maybe they have scales or smooth skin: Slim
Cutiemark if Pony: Two swords crossed together like an X with a flame trail around them.
(Tribe) Are they one of the three pony types? Maybe they are a serpent or a winged reptile? Here: Pegasus
Measurements/Body Type: ?
Educational Background: Cloudsdale high: Had average grades, but high grades at physical.
Personality: Quiet but very protective of her family, prefers to do stuff on her own due to her upbringing but very cheerful when with her siblings and younger children. Doesn't trust many easily, but may warm up to them over time.
History/Backstory: Grew up in Cloudsdale and is the oldest of four siblings (Twin sisters who are now four, another sister who is ten and a brother who is seven) and was often bullied because of her eyes. Her father was an explorer so he was gone for long periods of times and her mother is extremely ill and in the hospital most of the time so Crimson took it upon herself to care for her siblings and making sure they were well fed and her mothers hospital bills were paid. She got her cutiemark when she protected her siblings from some Timberwolves by using fire crystals infused in a sword. She moved to Canterlot when she got an apprenticeship in making armor and weapons and sent her siblings to Ponyville to live and came nearly everyday to check up on them, trusting the apple family who would check up on them if she couldn't.
Weapons: Sword strapped to her back, armor wings which produce metal feathers when flapped towards a target (That she only wears when leaving to find her father whose often in dangerous territory)
Abilities: She has an infinity for fire, and using her magic in her is able to make her body temperature extremely high that it may seem she's on fire, hence the nickname her family call her. She uses crystals to make fire ones that can explode on impact or used in her weapon.
I'm not sure if that's enough, so please ask if I need to add or change anything
Name: Stone Forge
Nicknames: Forge
Date of Birth: November, 16
Height: 7'
Weight: 380 lbs
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: straight
Age: 27
Mane: Black with crimson tps
Eyes: Faded blue should the part of his mane covering his eyes be moved
Species: Pony
Fur or Furless: Midnight blue fur
(Body type) Maybe they have scales or smooth skin: Appears to take on a more earthen look as if made from stone due to his toned musculature
Cutiemark if Pony: stone anvil with a sword and axe crossed behind it
Wing Span if Avian based:
Pattern if a species like Zebra
(Tribe) Are they one of the three pony types? Maybe they are a serpent or a winged reptile? Here: Earth Pony
Measurements/Body Type:A broad figure of pure toned muscle, a scar over his right shoulder, the left side of his face that goes over the eye and his left ear is shredded badly
Educational Background: Standard general ed, black smithing
Personality: A generally carefree and gentle personality that enjoys a good joke or prank and loves to converse with others as well as playing with children and usually is a joy to be around whilst giving advice and words of wisdom to those who need it yet his voice carries a gentle tone of authority and age despite how old he is
History/Backstory: Stone forge was born near the edges of the badlands to an earth pony couple but to their dismay, he was born completely blind. Knowing that where they lived wouldn't help the blind colt they moved to Phillydelphia in order to give him a better chance as well as a better life. Despite this Stone was picked on near constantly for his blindness yet somehow remained upbeat and cheerful. Eventually he learn to 'see' the world through what he calls 'the beat' or to better describe this: he essentially hear the world around him as if it's playing a song and learned to listen this rhythm to move about without running into this all the time. Stone eventually found his calling for blacksmithing at the age of 10 after he stumbled upon a smithy in the city and 'felt' the passion of the smith and wished to learn more. At first the smith refused but after letting him try and saw the potential in the colt he taught Stone everything he knew. After 6 years of learning to be a highly skilled smithy he decided to travel across all of equestria, offering his skill to those in need. Through this he gained a reputation of being a highly skilled and sought after smith, able to craft incredibly strong items that would rival the proud Minotaurian smiths. Through his travels he met many warriors who taught him how to defend himself, eventually learning the ways of the claymores, battle scythes, crossbows and polearms as well as his own martial arts he perfected from his ancestor Flash Step called the Pulse style. After 9 years of traveling he met a one Rarity Belle, to whom he forged some filigree and a silver setting for some dresses she was making thus in turn for his high quality of work became Rarity's go-to pony for all her metal working needs. With the payment he received from rarity (plus tip), he was finally able to purchase a working traveling forge and thus be able to forge anywhere his skills were required instead of having to go to the nearest smithy in order to work (and sometimes paying a heavy fee just to use their forge). Coming to the present Stone Forge is a rather unusually strong and frighteningly quick and agile pony despite his large size. A gentle giant with a heart of gold he travels around equestria offering his skills to those in need yet now days he usually found roaming somewhere near the town of Ponyville and Canterlot taking on his smithing orders and being close enough for Rarity to find him should she need some metalworking done for any of her orders. Stone is very conscientious of his blindness and hides it under his mane that he allowed to grow long in order to cover his eyes and wears a simple traveler's cap, he uses the beat in order to 'look' at others as if he isn't blind (though those who are skilled enough can detect his flaw through is ears very subtle movements) and avoids anyone and everything trying to near his face and will move to avoid the object to keep it from his face
Weapons: A unusually large poleaxe, a personalized heavy crossbow, a battle scythe made of dark Oak wood and Moonstone (took him 3 years to forge this blade), a pair to combat gloves and steel shin guards that are designed for blocking and precise strikes
Abilities: The Pulse style: He uses 'the pulse' in a very defensive style that is very hard to out maneuver and even harder to break through the defenses due to it's fluid movements and frightening speeds (the flaw to the style is anything made to be silent, trained to be silent (unless he's expecting them to do so), and some aerial attack (he can pinpoint pegasi via their wings flapping but say if a unicorn uses magic to throw something at him it's gonna hit or if a Pegasus dive bombs him) or there are too many different types of attackers facing against him), Unusual strength (able to rival Big Mad's strength if not is slightly stronger by a small margin), enhanced hearing touch and smell (think wolverine from the X-men though not as....op potent as him), superb runner (able to travel from ponyville to Canterlot in about 2 days nonstop instead of the usual week and a half (or Naruto's teleport jutsu)
I didn't know where to put it but he also vows never to use his weapons again unless he has no other choice and would rather talk his way out of a situation if he can rather than fight, please PM me if you need to clarify things or require more info him, and thanks for considering my character
4542020 What the hell am I even seeing? This is a laughably overpowered boring OC that doesn't fit the setting at all. I'm sorry, but he sounds out of a bad fanfic.
4534778 FFS GUYS, Did you guys not read the story? No overpowered human ocs that don't make sense for the setting.
4550520 How is he human then related to all these different beings from different universes. Its not really coherent.
4534329 Well unlike some of the other examples, it looks like you paid attention and the original character is passable. I will be working them in soon.
4535836 Hhm, did a brief skim. Will look more into the character soon.
4551065 Awesome thanks, just let me know if you need any other information
Name: Winn McCormick
Nicknames: Blitz or Hero
Date of Birth: June 10, 1995
Height: 5'11
Weight: 250 lbs
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Age: 26
Mane: Midnight Black
Eyes: Electric Blue
Species: Human
Fur or Furless: Furless
(Body type) scales or smooth skin: Smooth Skin
Measurements/Body Type: Athletic Physique
Educational Background: Columbia University, College of Creative Writing
Personality: Winn is an ambitious, good-natured and energetic man. However, when his patience reached its limit, nobody would receive mercy or second chances from him. Winn's main personality flaw is his hero complex, with him constantly trying to save everybody, even people that openly attempt to kill him, and feeling it his place to take the blame for things he never committed.
History/Backstory: Winn McCormick was an everyday average normal guy, who was going through some financial issues, that was down on his luck but a stranger (Loan Shark) gave him some money to pay his debts. After some time, the loan shark and some of his buddies came to Winn's house and roughed him up, before taking everything he owned. Winn had no choice but to move back to his abusive parent's, which led to fights and arguments, who dragged him further into debt and caused him to run away from it all. Winn ran and ran until a random tear throughout the space-time continuum appeared, sucked him in and brought him to Equestria.
Weapons: Pip-Boy 3000 (Fallout: New Vegas)
Abilities: Energy Generation - Winn is able to generate different kinds of energies of his choosing, making it an offensive weapon in time of need. He can even generate different kinds of energy at the same time, but he needs further training for that to become a reality.
P.S. Is the Pip-Boy 3000 going to work like the in-game mechanics or not?
P.S.S. I made a new character for you
Still taking submissions.