(Review) Violet Masturbates With A Plushie (NSFW/Clop) · 5:23am Apr 11th, 2017
Review #2
<3,000 words
First Impressions
As a huge fan of everything Wendy Crescent the title alone gripped my by the manhood and made me smile. The title aside, the description of a small, fully aged, mare relaxing with a plushie is kind of a sensitive area, because it can go any way, many of them wrong. My concern is that it’ll be a bland clopfic, regardless of my hopes.
Plot
Well, a cheesey grin is plastered on my face and I had my wife read this little tale, too. She enjoyed it as well.
Violet, our protagonist, is having a rough day on set of a movie and retires to her trailer to rest. She pulls her favorite life sized plushie over, one that’s shaped like a stallion she likes, and cuddles into it. Then she casts a spell that brings its penis to life and has passionate sex with it. It’s a pleaser, for sure!
Mechanics
It flowed very well, from her leaving the set to her climax, I felt like I was watching it all. Experiencing it in a way a man shouldn’t. My wife, on the other hoof, couldn’t form a sentence beyond ‘wow. That was, just, yeah…’
Grammar/Formatting—
Fine in every aspect.
Dialogue/Narration/POV—
It all worked in the right way. From the perspective we’re at, the narration was on point and pulled me in. I was listening to a mare have sex in my mind’s eye and ear.
Worldbuilding—
Good. Sure, it was described well, but once the sex started it felt like the whole world was just a white sheet covered room. It wasn’t as immersive, as far as details of the room before, during, or after climax, to put and keep me in a trailer setting.
Pacing—
It flowed well, save for a scene near the end where she’s nearing orgasm and is being plowed hard that kind of lost me because the fantasy switched slightly.
Show/Tell—
Lots of show, little to no tell!
Originality
A pony masturbates with a doll three times her size? New to me! Just thinking of that gets me kind of excited, because it’s wrong in the right way.
Impression—
I really like this story and I think I’m inspired to steal some ideas for a future story! (Sorry W.C., but it’s gonna happen!)
Grading Scale
93-100: Masterpiece
79-92: Recommended
63-78: Enjoyable
50-62: Needs Work
49 and Under: Avoid
Scores
Plot: 20/25
Mechanics: 18/20
Characterization: 20/25
Originality: 8/10
Impact: 17/20
Final Score:83/100
Recommended
A great story, albeit short, from a really good clop/romance author. I, for one, look forward to the sequel!
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A review... I have... no words. This is AMAZING! I am truly happy that you liked the story this much!
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Don't you have reviews for your other stories?
4494906 No, actually this is the first review that I am aware of!
4494933 OMG.
OMG OMG OMG.
SONGBIRD!
I call it! Doing it! Loved it!
But, I'll have to be unbiased and professional.
So don't be upset with what I review.
I have to re-read it (
) to get an accurate honest portrayal.
4494948 I am blushing profusely right now...
And I would never be upset with a review even if I get a 1/100 :P As long as I can learn from it.
4494950
I doubt away with the scoring system.
It's too complicated.
But trust me, you'll never get a low score or review as long as you keep writing the way you do, that's a fact, not a feeling or opinion.