Rereading the first chapter of my oldest story on here · 1:51am Mar 11th, 2017
Holy shit it can be worked on. I mean, it works, and can stand alone as it's own story. So I may rewrite it and make it a story by it's own merit.
It'll be longer. It'll have more details. It'll be darker. Seriously I'm gunna make it darker. Only if by a bit...
Because it was written to be dark