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ClosetBrony


Just an old Brony with a love of the arts in its various forms; the written/spoken word; music, art, etc.

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    Almost a year ago, I started reading a wonderful little story called Silver Glow's Journal. Admiral Biscuit has been faithfully updating the story on a daily basis and giving us a peek in the title character's daily life during her year long stay on earth. The dedication, heart and soul he has poured into this work is admired

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Mar
4th
2017

I Humbly Offer A Poem · 11:30am Mar 4th, 2017

Almost a year ago, I started reading a wonderful little story called Silver Glow's Journal. Admiral Biscuit has been faithfully updating the story on a daily basis and giving us a peek in the title character's daily life during her year long stay on earth. The dedication, heart and soul he has poured into this work is admired and appreciated by many of us readers; a few of which who have been inspired to create works for our own. In that 'vane', I offer up a humble poem as a token of thanks for a story that had become a daily routine in my life. The last time I tried writing poetry was many, many moons ago in high school. I cannot imagine my writing has gotten any better. Consider yourself warned. :derpytongue2:

A Feather
I found an azure feather on my window
Shivering with excitement against the glass
It comes from a faraway land
With hope and curiosity in tow
“There’s more to follow” it pronounced
Among the rays of the dawning sun

I found a cerulean feather on my window
Trembling with eagerness awaiting to share
Tales Of Battles and Journeys
And new friends to hold dear
“So much to say” it exclaimed
In the warmth of the midday sun

I found a cyan feather on my window
It quivers in joy as it describes
New knowledge of arts and sciences
And Lovers gained
“Until tomorrow” it enthused
Awash in the radiance of the setting sun

I found a blue feather on my window
Restless as it conveys
It learned of culture and custom different yet the same
Enlightened with new perspectives of itself and its kind
“My visit is done now” it wistfully stated
Embraced in the moonlight’s Silver Glow.

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Comments ( 3 )

Just stumbled upon your page and this blog and I have to say, very nice job! Loving how the feather changes colour and the story behind it itself changes as the day progresses :twilightsmile:

5042914
Thank you for the kind words. The color change was a happy accident tbqh. :twilightsheepish:

5042979
You’re welcome! Well, it still seems to be an accident with a positive outcome :pinkiesmile:

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