Alright! Finally back! Had a lot of stuff to do in RL, but I've completely rewrote a lot of the chapters I had originally published. So I've unpublished them and re-uploading them once I've reformatted them and added all the new stuff. Took a lot of people's advice and tried to keep things interesting throughout while not losing too much of the atmosphere and moderate pacing. Fleshed out Narrator
A nice fella from PonyChan went through my WIP story here. He pointed out a lot of things which I've been slowly chopping away at as well as some others which I had completely missed and thanks a lot for it!
Chapter IV is completed but it is so long (nearly 3500 words) that I may end up splicing it into Chapters IV and V depending on how much I add or cut while going through the edit and rewrite later this afternoon. Should have it up by Monday evening.