Alright! Finally back! Had a lot of stuff to do in RL, but I've completely rewrote a lot of the chapters I had originally published. So I've unpublished them and re-uploading them once I've reformatted them and added all the new stuff. Took a lot of people's advice and tried to keep things interesting throughout while not losing too much of the atmosphere and moderate pacing. Fleshed out Narrator
A nice fella from PonyChan went through my WIP story here. He pointed out a lot of things which I've been slowly chopping away at as well as some others which I had completely missed and thanks a lot for it!
Chapter IV is completed but it is so long (nearly 3500 words) that I may end up splicing it into Chapters IV and V depending on how much I add or cut while going through the edit and rewrite later this afternoon. Should have it up by Monday evening.
Chapter IV is completed but it is so long (nearly 3500 words) that I may end up splicing it into Chapters IV and V depending on how much I add or cut while going through the edit and rewrite later this afternoon. Should have it up by Monday evening.