edits done! · 11:59pm Oct 20th, 2011
There we go, prereader logged on, and gave some feedback. I made a few corrections, but the main change in the story is the slight expansion of the teleportation mishap's effect.
I wanted more of an emphasis that there had been a "swap" between AJ and RD, not simply a "rainbow loses her wings" thing. It is the driving point of the story, of course, but I wanted to clear up that it isn't a one sided exchange...
...in more ways that yet remain to be seen :)
Please comment on the chapter if you have any opinion on the changes! I am always open to feedback.