In Brightest Night, In Darkest Day Update: Custom-Made Corps Oaths

Joker again. Well, development of my Sinestro Corps Displaced is coming along swimmingly. In fact, my co-author, Hopelight, has devised custom-made oaths for both the Sinestro and Orange Lantern Corps. Here's Sinestro's:

In Brightest Night in Darkest Day

We use the fear you kept at bay

To fight the wrong and make evil pay

Sinestro's path, it is our way!

Now here's Orange:

This is my power, it is my right

Be it Brightest Day or pitch-black night

Let my desire become my might

Til my Light falls in the final fight

Beware this Oath and this great Light!

What do you guys think?

Comments

[Vigriff]

Good oaths.