To Be a Hero 'Super versus Ultra part two' ready for editing

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Took a while, be this was a hard chapter do. Laid the ground work for the future of this version of Twilight and a cameo by the main villain of AJs' arc: Nightmare Moon. Before you freak, she's not the only equestrian villain per say for AJ, as Darkseid also will tell her how to summon the equestrian version of the Main DC villain- Solomon Grundy.

Be warned if you hate anthro ponies, NM will have an anthro form when she appear in the story (though remember, since the form is given to her by Darkseid, there is a catch to the power boost the form he gives her. Also, it's not permanent due to her final fate).

Please tell what needs to be improved, be it grammar, spelling or other. Just don't be a complete dick and/or about and say stuff along the lines of "Urrh Durrh, ThIs SUCks cuse ya didn't do dis eer that" or "Why did you do this, Onomonopia/Iowaforevers's Superman fic is better", or even "You should totally Do this,because it's better that than your idea because I said it was".

But right now, you got till monday before i upload it here. Seriously I need to get a semi permanent editor/proofreader who I can use to help me refine my ideas.

PS: There will be an epilogue to 'Super versus Ultra'.