Long Distance Chapter Four Revision · 8:32pm Oct 19th, 2011
So I had a talk with an awesome reviewer on Ponychan who goes by the name of Demetrius, and it helped me realise that Chapter Four has some issues. It really isn't what I originally intended it to be.
So I revised it. Rewrote some bits, rearranged others, added stuff in, took stuff out. I'm fairly happy with the result, and I'd recommend reading it if you want to get the full enjoyment out of Long Distance, although, given the story's largely episodic nature so far, it's not strictly necessary.