First Excerpt · 11:11am Sep 15th, 2012

I told you guys I'd periodically be posting stuff to show you my progress and get help, but this time it's only to show my huge progress tonight. I was able to get about 750 words done tonight - four paragraphs worth and about 1/5 or 1/6 of my goal amount, depending on how long I'll make the sex parts.
Here's your excerpt, which is actually the whole second paragraph:

'While all changelings knew when the process was over, only the ascending Queen ever knew the full ritual to become the true Queen - and this was no exception, as Princess Chrysalis had to make her own way outside of the hive, all the way out to Ponyville. Of course, not as herself. If Chrysalis had simply gone without disguise, she surely would have been taken away and prosecuted for crimes that her race committed against Equestria and its inhabitants. No, Princess Chrysalis took on the look of Lyra Heartstrings, who had gone out of town for the week to visit someone. For Princesses and Queens of the changeling race, bypassing the ever-present magical shield - preventing lesser beings from entering - was easy. The difficult part of the ritual was the new Queen's search for a potential mate - female changelings were highly picky when it came to their lifetime mates. No male changeling could offer the DNA advantages a regular stallion brought, as each step in their direction brought changelings ever closer to invading Equestria without problem.'

What're you looking at me like that for? Sure, I said it wouldn't have a connection with the previous chapters, but I didn't say it wasn't going to have at least something interesting.
AND FUCK NO I WOULDN'T GIVE YOU PORN FOR AN EXCERPT. If I did that, it'd bore you when you read it with the rest of it~

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